Avatar: The Gamer

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Description

Dying in a truck accident Levi wakes up to find himself in a completely new world, so different from his own and yet so familiar, the world of "Avatar The last airbender"

Will he survive and thrive in this new world and climb the leader of power or will he fall down and be forgotten like countless people before him

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: xXTheDarkOneXx

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(7)

SoldiergeneralRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Been binging a lot of these fanfic type stories. What I like about this one is for the most part the main character doesn't have an absurd amount of skills or can instantly do too many things. Interaction between other characters is believable and how the plot has been progressing makes sense. Give it a read.
EastilingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Enjoyed it so far. The MC is fairly smart, trope wise and the System is interesting.
The world building society far isn't much but looking forward to when the MC gets into the larger world and the author can start spreading their wings beyond Canon or Canon-Adjacent stuff.
I kinda hope he stays in the Spirit world or away from Home long enough for the Avatar to get freed without him, just to increase the misunderstanding of Tobi regarding his future sight.
That would be a little cruel to his family though so maybe not.
KuroKuramaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
So the story started interesting, I like idea of Mc gaining more bending powers over the course of story, the system is well-made (despite making Mc a little OP) and I really like how Mc gets new skills by training or surviving stuff.
The mistakes are corrected when pointed out to author so this is a big +; and Author answers questions (At least if they see it) so if someone is curious about some stuff, or just don't remember details then that persons have a chance to get their answers.
The grammar aspect of the story is good, not perfect, but as I mentioned if mistakes are pointed the author corrects them; and even when mistakes appear they aren't soo bad.
The only thing I didn't (and still am not a fan of) is
the fact Mc can summon characters from another worlds as loyal subordinates; but he can't do it very much (at this point I think he has only one ticket to do it) so it is not as big problem as I thought it would be
So summarizing, I am recommending this story if you are looking for a nice and interesting story to read.
TelikRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
So far the story is a great read, not 10/10 but definitely reaching a solid 8/10. I love the combination between the system and the avatar world as I see so little done with the show. The main character also has so much character that I’m always excited to read more. While there are some grammar issues, they are minor enough that the story is never ruined
SqwakerRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
This novel is an isekai into the world of Avatar, with the Gamer system. I dropped it after the introduction of a 'summon system', where the author is now introducing elements from Naruto, and possibly other media later on.
The author struggles with maintaining a consistent style of writing,
As of to the point I've read, there isn't much of a story beyond preparing for the story of cannon, and 'get stronger'. This isn't a massive fault but the nature of the Gamer system results in a lot of shortcuts. The author also seems to struggle with realistic outcomes.
When MC is reborn, he is fully conscious, with vision and hearing, among other senses, that you would expect in a fully developed adult, and not a newborn baby. In in example, babies have blurred vision, and yet MC can see with perfect clarity.
The MC reveals knowledge that he has no way of knowing — that even adults around him don't know — and he somehow gets away without further questioning by just making up an excuse that he's 'heard it from other people'. In hindsight, there is a specific person he could've heard this from, but this mostly shows as being swept under the rug.
The summoning system was a deal breaker for me. It's completely irrelevant to the plot and world of Avatar, and he can even summon people from other franchises like Naruto, thus introducing their power systems as well.
Probably the worst part of this novel is the grammar. The author make consistent, frequent errors, with an large amount of misspelling or mising letters, or even just wholely incorrect such as using "his" when addressing himself in dialogue — which should be first person, "I". The sentences are often excessively long, with whole paragraphs relying on commas instead of periods, and there are even instances of using periods after a "?" or "!", which themselves are sentence-enders.
The author has experimented with narrative changes, particularly from third-person to first-person for a couple chapters (iirc), and while there i
menolousRoyal Road
★ 1.0
This story has so little influence from avatar so far that they might as well have just made an oc.
The writing is okay in general. However conversations between characters feel very stiff. There is also a noticeable lack of other characters given that the authour chose to just dip out on the avatar world within the first 10 chaps. I came to read cool vending stuff. Not whatever this current double isekai weirdness is.
Collin FischerRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Lots of grammatical errors and no real corrections. Regardless of author is fixing later chapters you need to update early chapters it’s where everyone starts. Should mention summoning system in description of the novel because really turns off the whole progression and makes the plot and characters useless when he can summon op characters from other universes