Attempt 2

Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

sciencebasedlife

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• Fire209Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  now, I love the premise of this story and others similar to these, and I probably would've enjoyed the authors previous wreck just because of the premise. I do find that I do tend to enjoy and remember the stories that are better, and this story has the potential to be. I find that there are two main elements to a story that help it continue: planning and drive. The most important part is drive, as story's with terrible planning have continued through the authors pure drive.        Donot be afraid to take breaks or hiatuses regularly to maintain drive, and different schedules work for different people, just remember to never strain yourself to churn out chapters, as it only worsens the story. The next most important is planning, and while I did mention how some authors could trudge through even with little planning as long as they had drive? They are not the rule, only the exception, and many authors lose motivation without planning. I have once heard an excellent method where the author would set several goals or things that needed to happen in the chapter, and then go ham with the writing, making sure to reach these checkpoints, but he notes that sometimes the flow isn't right, so he would skip entire goals to maintain the flow of the story. In the end, there is not a lot to judge the story on yet, but always plan and keep motivated, even if you have to take a break.
• JazehiahRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Interesting so far. I'd like to see where the story goes. The protaganist reminds me of Vince from "Super Powereds"... including his initial lack of control.