Asuras and Dragons **Indefinite Hiatus**

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Description

We find ourselves as JD a typical sci-fi loving, video gaming, and anime loving nerd barely enjoying life playing video games and watching anime, but everything changes when he goes to sleep... Is it for the better though?

Authors Note:

Cover Art is a picture from Google Images. Feel free to submit some drawings if you want :-D

Chapter release is honestly whenever I can. (Warning. Story is partially wish fulfillment.)

Also, if any one has anything to add that they feel would make this story better please let me know although I can't promise that I will add it in or change something I will at least take your ideas into consideration as long as it don't change my view for the story too much.

Please read all the chapters posted before getting mad over something that doens't make sense, it may have been explained in the next chapter or a later chapter. If it has not been explained feel free to comment or pm me and I will do my best to explain it in a future chapter or in a reply for you.Alot of things that have been complained about are actually explained in the same chapter or in a later chapter.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Str1keFreedom00

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSCI-FISUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERSMALE LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
1,077
Views
831,048

Chapters(65 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Dark EngineerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I like the idea of owning space station by MC, he has so much options on this station that can make it really interesting story, keep it up. More chapters wanted!
  • AssmdxdRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Overall I enjoy your story
    And I like the idea of a fantasy  world  with sci-features theam
  • RobotjoeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Keep doing what you do. Although a little fast pace I love it and I have no problem with that. Do not go overboard with the harem please. Lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalal
  • OminusWindRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Update chapter 14: The grammar and sentence structure is now much better and the flow of the story is smoother. It's easier to read now.
    Ok. Lets start with the fact that the structure of your sentences is a mess. It might sound ok in your head but when you read it, it just becomes a jumbled mass of rambling.
    Start by using more commas. Then get rid of all the repeats that you have, where your MC thinks something, then says it RIGHT after.
    The plot and even the setting of your story are pretty nice, but try to make your characters more 'real'. Give them more depth and reasoning, for example why  does your MC prefer the name JD? What does the 'D' stand for? Why is he anti-social? Why is Britt his friend? If Britt does things that bug JD, why doesn't he already expect it to happen? (Leaving his door open, mocking anime) Why does JD prefer playing video games over anything else?
    Of course if you're just writing this book as a hobby, then it doesn't really matter but if you want to one day self publish it, or at least sucessfully finish it, please consider these things. Even if you don't have much time to write, just write slower or have someone look it over.
  • DethatiRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    OVERALL: So over all I enjoy the story and the current premise, it doesn't do too many things to be different, but just enough that i'm not reading the same light novel 6 times. Its a reincarnation story in a sci-fi/magic universe, that starts with an op mc and an interesting ranking system.
    STYLE: I like the author's descriptions and system in place for the story. I feel the author has some small issues to make his own niche in style but otherwise is decent.
    STORY: Its a very standard reincarnation OPMC plot, I wish he started weaker but had other things he excelled at to make up for the not immediate op lvl. The story so far has me hooked and wanting to see the next chapter.
    Grammar: Its in the top 40 on grammar for me. the author makes moderate mistakes but no where near the level of dropping it due to disjointed writing.
    Character: The MC is a very standard OPMC character with little to differentiate himself from other OPMC's. This needs more work to be fleshed out and have him be more than a 2 dimensional character. I'd like to see some flaws, and also some traits given to him in the coming chapters.
  • Destr0y3rARoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    i think it s great story and wish for it to continue
  • YeavonRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Not much to say it's too soon to really judge the story since there is only one chapter out at the time of this posting however I have mixed feelings about it.... mostly i have a problem with how the MC talks and reacts to things....
    the idea is unoriginal but i hope the author takes it to an interesting new twist or path but I can't really get my hopes up, However we shall see wont we?
  • SedactiveRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    So how to begin.... as i was reading this novel at one point the author posted a review of some guy which he didnt agree with.
    Most of his counter arguments was him basically saying it has been done before so whats the problem.
    If someone says something is bad and gives you a reason and you tell him but everyone does it, that doesnt make it right.
    Its still bad, you even agree with him by saying everyone does the bad thing so why cant i?
    That is for the first part now for my personal experience with this novel.
    I like these type of novels about some dude getting powers ect going to some universe interacting with societys meeting people ect.
    This novel had a lot of promise but its kinda ruined i still enjoy this novel but its on the level of reading a random manga just to kill time.
    To further explain this point i will take some examples first is an event that happens later in the novel and that is when the 1st princess and the MC go to a island to find a book on dark energy.......
    I dont even fucking know where to begin but yea lets start......
    Why does the MC and the 1st princes need to go there alone?
    In the freaking 1000000000 years of the existance of this kingdom an island where soldiers of said kingdom are stationed have never set foot outside of their camps to map the area/island??
    To show how retared this point is when the MC and the princess go there (2-3 hours ride) they walk for i dont know 2-3 hours at least the sun hasnt gone down yet.
    And they already freaking encounter some kind of base they both enter it lacking any lamps or torches which the princess complains about (doesnt she know basic spells lol wasnt she a book worm lol).
    But yea another reason for the MC to show of to invent A SPELL yes he invetend a BIGGER LIGHT BALLLLL lol.
    Then they explore a bit and find 1 thousand or more mobile combat suits just for the taking........
    Yet again this is credited as an achievement of the MC because in the 1xxxxxxxxxx years none of the residents of that pla
  • FlashfyreRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    You had a nice system for leveling, but you've butchered your story constraining a story which is meant for SPACE and leaving him exploring a continent that makes absolutely no sense for it not having been explored. With how many "Immortal" ranks there are in this new continent, and how huge the draconians population is it  makes no sense the queen is just immortal ranked. They have satelites and can go into space, hell they have magic and technology they could probably just use sensors to find big influxes of energy Just like how they noticed him in the space fortress (Why do they care when the supposedly "unexplored continent" has literal GODS as random beasts, what happened to sun god being releant whatsoever?).
    This story also isnt well done enough for you to keep wantonly adding random fetishes of yours to his harem, because as an author you are not showing the ability to keep up with these girls without them fading into obscurity without any good reason.
  • pally320Royal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    Another story where the auther has a fetish for talking to a female GOD that flirts with him, yeah, that's about all you need to know to know it's going to be a harem where eventually the MC sleeps with a GOD and gets super powerful...
    Now I don't mind OP Main Characters, What I do mind is when someone writes a story where the MC is gunning for god and the MC is obviously a slob who does nothing and the god likes them, then instantly they are good at doing things, it's like saying He become President without running for election and hasn't worked a day in his life and He's horible at being social in any way!
    I know I ranted, I love the Premise as long as it didn't have the interaction with a god and wasn't shamelessly on the path of a harem fetish I would like it but it is so I ranted.
    Style: Not the worst writing style but not the best so average presentation.
    Story: Utter crap mixed with a good idea, Yeah, harem.
    Grammer: You can understand the story but there are parts that just don't flow when reading, something everyone experiances when they don't edit. Not to mention that he doesn't seperate the speach text so you can only tell who is talking most of the time by context.
    Character: Utter Crap, MC has no real character and all he does is think or talk about likeing anime boobs and big butts mixed with the ocasional thought of making Artificialy Intelegent girls as sex toys/AI Harem. The other characters just add fuel to the fire of the MC's lust.
    Overall if you like that type of OP harem crap it's good for you.
    If not then leave, fast, you can't unread this.