Astrum Ascent

Victor always looked up at the stars and wondered what might be out there, little did he know the stars held more dangers than he could have imagined. Torn from his home and faced with an enemy of immeasurable might, Victor needs to advance and grow in strength if he wants to have any chance of survival.

This is my first attempt at a proper piece of fiction, if you're interested in giving it a read please tell me what you think. All comments and suggestions are welcomed, may the stars guide your path.