Astrale Mythologica
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Follow Essen Belmont as a job gone wrong and a gift with unseen strings take them into the world of Street Samurai, Cultivators and Nightrunners. Installed with stolen corpo tech to save their life and cursed/blessed with power and a changing identity, watch as Essen finds their path through the winding dream.
heavily inspired by trouble with horns, stray cat strut, tower of somnus, cyberpunk 2077, power punch and digital marine. sorry if I'm slow or if its bad, this is my first story. I've cross posted between royal road anscribble hub.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Mystrale
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 14
- Views
- 1,811
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Stream of ConsciousnessRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Keep it going, cannot wait for more of it to come out. Reading through has built a world of danger and intrigue with how it is working and cannot wait for the next chapter to come out, keep pumping it out. :)
I'll get the worst part out of the way. The grammar has simple spelling mistakes throughout it, the most common is the use of speaking and having it on the previous word, leaving a gap." this is an example of what you do "and "this is what you should do." I hope that makes sense.
Onto the good parts. The style used makes me flip through the metaphorical pages, cannot wait for more of it to go and for you to continue on.
The story is superb, creating a world full of life and adventure and with a lot more for it to continue forward. Building and adding factions and groups of people, adding history to the world and giving individual incentives.
Loving the characters and introducing them one at a time, giving them a real feel and difference between each one, making them seem alive.
Thanks for writing and I cannot wait for you to continue this, as well as see how Essen will deal with his gear in the future. :)