Astartes in a fantasy world

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The year 2343, Fred, a genetically engineered, special forces war veteran, is currently aboard the HMSS Mayflower, an experimental spaceship with mankind's first FTL warp drive. During its first test drive, the technicians aboard were giving last-minute checks to the ship before evacuation as it would be going on a preprogrammed flight. our MC, head technician of the ship would have been the last to leave the ship, however, the ship's test was executed and he ended up alone for the jump. Only it was heading for a black hole.

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this is my first work,

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Tigerwarrior

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Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 495
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Community Reviews(10)

temofonteRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Ok for all the 40k fans out here..its not exactly what your thinking right now. More so someone who has the God emperors knowledge to make similar things and the system basic is what makes it more 40k like otherwise it would be more a brain leech instead of a gene seed. Still it's a good read, would recommend it. The author does at least research on topics they choose to talk about. He is still a child though..but at some point and fingers crossed he will grow up enough to make a bolter. Even if he doesn't the magic system has some fun limitations. Which is quite nice. The writing is pretty good, and very few errors the story is engaging, entertaining, and more on the lighter side of things honestly would highly recommend it's a enjoyable story and read. Oh right..forgot to mention the world building is pretty nice also
GbmkihgvRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
First of all, I would like to say that this review may be a little to based on emotion. I just really like the story. It has interesting family drama, MC doesn't get OP immediately but gets traits that will make him stronger in the long run and it has rapid tech advancement thanks to MC though it is (for me) within believable limits. I also like the fast pacing of the story and that it doesn't spend much time on small details that aren't necessary (how they build a castle, or how the MC improved agriculture with modern tech). As someone who read many medieval reincarnation stories, and heard these details many times it is quite a big positive. All in all, this story is a great example of kingdom building, fantasy and reincarnation merging. There is also a little Warhammer 40k. I think there is much potential for the future in this piece.
LupoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Awesome story so far, slower start, great character development, excellent world building. Minor if annoying grammer mistakes occasionally or typos. The story explains everything in a very natural and methodical way doesn't tend to over explain things unless it directly relates to story progression, and everything makes sense. Charictor is smart and intelligent without being snobby, wimpy, or acting overly superior to everyone else like some stories do. Side characters like family and friends actually have history and feel real. The story line progress thuss far has been Over all a gem of a novel.
SeelenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Hey guys and girls,
If you would ask me to read that story i would answer hell yes! It is one of my absolute Favorites and i spend a whole day reading until i reached the actual chapter which is 58.
More over it is fascinating that these novel rules with a trashy name which dont make you believe it could be great, while surprisingly it is. It is really funny and it takes all of your tension.
The story without the fact of using to much official terms from other stories that people are be able to think about like fanfiction could be stay alone if the author would change this marked names in it.
Setting, the novel could be placed between all Novels of Magical Worlds which are changed by industrial revolution where MC uses modern technologies to confirm a place between the first the places inside of the race which one becomes the leader of everything.
Here the story became some interesting elements, while at the beginning MC looks like overpowerd he slowly learns the limits of modern technologies in a middleaged fantasy world.
Only the fact im studieng history at the university in germany made me in some points inside the story struggling well known it isnt a historical story the author used a lot of historical facts for his fantasy fiction. If you study history you will find a lot of anachronism to the real history inside of it. If you arent. Dont be afraid.
The System and Magic benefits and support MC how it should be in these kind of stories. On the other Hand MC have to learn a lot about how the system and Magic works and what does this means for his modern technologies and plans? No spoiler sherlock. Read it on this point. It is great how he solved that part.
Some solutions for actions or points inside the story which lead you to think they could be plotholes are well solved. Beside some of them could make you feel still confused while they are still completly aceptable, logical and recognizeable.
While the story dont claim character deepness some of them are well
blacknmild611Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I enjoy this and really appreciate the time taken. I hhope that continues in later chapters and clearly you have put alot of forethought into this that I really enjoy. I look forward to Chaos Gods popping up, or the unfortunate enemy getting turned into a servitor.
Please come back Author!! Keep up the good work. I can barely get to 50 words. It shows that you can have a edited work put out very quickly which is in its own way a huge plus! I am glad I have added this to my follow list.
0011Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
For the most part this is a great book with no noticable grammar or spelling errors, but there are a few flaws.
1. It is hard to imagine in my head what the author is talking about sometimes especially when he references land. A map in the author's comments section would be useful.
2. I feel like the pacing the story is a bit unrealistic with how fast and smooth his technological advancements are.
3. I am slightly worried that all of the Warhammer references will get the author sued for copyright infringement.
Cyoa11aaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
When I first clicked on this book I expected a Space Marine to start ripping orcs apart. Was very surprised to find out that its a reincarnation story, not sure if its a good or bad surprise but it was intresting to read. The first chapters after the introduction feel like they're 95% blue screens so if you love that great! If not maybe skip around a bit? There are some errors and what not but the english is good, sometimes the sentences can feel a bit clunky but thats fine. Its kinda hard to belive the MC is doing so much as a child, which is weird because ive read plenty of stories where you have smart and op kids but in here it feels weird? Probably because hes still so young still. I dont want to hurt a story by giving it below a 4 so I wont but if i were to actully grade it it would be a 3.5? If the author ever writes to chapter 40 or so ill be happy to take another look.
Flea04Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This kept my attention. The story was awesome and I loved Fred the MC. World building is creative. Needs editing.
I wish it wasn't on hiatus. I would've read ahead on patreon if I could, but I couldn't find it and the discord link doesn't work.
I'll add it to my follow and favorite list and cross my fingers for more soon.
DelarockRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The premise and first chapter was kind of weird, but getting past that, the reincarnated stuff is entertaining enough. The plotlines kind of work, and I can see potential in where it's going.
There are several issues, though.
First of, the grammar is horrible. There are incorrect punctuation in almost every single sentence, and lots of misspelled words. This ruined the flow of the story as you often have to read a section several times and then try to guess what the author were trying to write. A lot of the misspelling is also repeated through several chapters despite readers giving feedback on them.
Another issue is the age of the characters. That the MC is older than he appears and doesn't act his age is fair enough (although he doesn't act or speak according to his real age either), but all the other kids in the story act and speak as if they are twice their age. A 4 year old acting like a 10 year old is weird enough, but when all 4 year olds act like that it comes across as sloppy. If that is how you want them to act, age them up and jump some years.
All in all, I think the author need to proofread his story before publishing, and he desperately needs an editor. If he gets that, this could be an ok story.
Edit: I wrote this review after 20 chapters, but after that the story improved in several areas. There were fewer spelling mistakes and once the MC got adult-ish, the age thing wasnt such a problem. As such, I've improved some of the scores.
TinyBookDragonRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This story falls into the trap of making the world and everyone in it really dumb so that the MC can seem smarter by comparison. The writing isn't bad but the sheer low-level knowledge and ignorance of this world are completely unrealistic. Also, the reactions to what the MC does are unrealistic as well.
HOWEVER... I'm still reading this despite the flaws so something about this is keeping me here. Give it a try and decide for yourselves.