Assassins Revenge

Self-Published

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Have you ever fallen for someone out of blue?

What if that person was killed right in front of you? What would you do?

Chapters(2 total)

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  • 1Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The author seems to really want the readers to think the main character is cool, and it's so obviously forced that it has a contrasted effect. If only one's good attributes are described, people will fill the void of their humanity with general negativity in their subconscious, instead of letting the author control the narrative of their character. Otherwise, they come off as inhuman and not relatable characters. Grammer was decent, details were somewhat lacking. Sentance structure was also decent.