assassin to insect
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
the best assassin in the world dies and reincarnated into a OP mosquito watch as he grows into something new in this new world
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- dragonboy
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 33
- Views
- 3,126
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The MC is not given half the attention as the all the system options and prompts. The dialogue structure and prose needs to be fixed up to make it better, and frankly more readable. The idea is something I like, but it doesn't even really get the point before ending, doing far more with system set up. I would have preferred a character focus before the system hit.
- SaphyronRoyal Road★★★ 3.0As described in my title, the lack of punctuation is really killing this story. While I am personally bad at it myself, and can easily understand people having trouble with it, but for the entirety of the prologue I have yet to see a comma.
In addition, you seem to rush the MC way too much. It makes me not really care about him much.