Assassin God

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Chaos Leader

• Chapter 21
  Jan 21, 2018
• Chapter 20
  Jan 20, 2018
• Chapter 19
  Jan 18, 2018
• Chapter 18.5
  Jan 16, 2018
• Chapter 18
  Jan 14, 2018
• Chapter 17
  Jan 12, 2018
• Chapter 16
  Jan 10, 2018
• Question????
  Jan 9, 2018
• Chapter 15
  Jan 7, 2018
• Chapter 14
  Jan 5, 2018
• Chapter 13
  Jan 4, 2018
• Chapter 12
  Jan 3, 2018
• Chapter 11
  Jan 2, 2018
• Chapter 10
  Jan 1, 2018
• Chapter 9
  Dec 31, 2017
• Chapter 8
  Dec 30, 2017
• Chapter 7
  Dec 29, 2017
• Chapter 6
  Dec 28, 2017
• Chapter 5
  Dec 27, 2017
• Chapter 4
  Dec 26, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• Montizuma59Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  The story is good and entertained me. But it's not a story, only a list of plot points. The author needs to go and flesh the story out more, taking the current 20 chapters and stretching them out to be at least 100, with each arc having 20 chapters.
  The first arc, which is chapter 1 till the death of the dwarf should be at least 10~20 chapters.
  To the capital arc should be 6~10 chapters.
  His assassin for the dark guild arc should be 20~30 chapters. The tornumant arc should be 15~25 chapters.
  His training with Zen in the mountain should be 10~25 chapters.
  His short army arc should be 5 chapters.
  His revenge arc ending with the death of the Pope should be 25~50 chapter, since that's what the story has been leading it to.
  This leaves the story with a minimum of at least 86 chapter that fleshes out the characters, since a lot of characters do things without you knowing why.
  We know the princess likes Vel and is attached to him  ecause of the curse. But the level is crazy because all I know is that they only meet twice for very brief periods of time.
  The noble girl who druged him is completely forgotten about and useless. If she  was at least memorable, or effected the MC's character, that would have been fine, but she is useless.
  The dwarf has the best character, but why isn't he upset about his disciple being reckless and killing a mob boss. And why does he sacrifice himself to protect Vel, with an excuse other than "I thought both you and your father blacksmithing".
  The Pope, why does he want to become a god, and how did he even figure out how to become a god. He is both the most important character in the story but all we know about him is he wants to become a god no matter what, and he is easily killed.
  The MC's parents. You can just leave the prologue as it is. Just have chapter 1 be set a few days before the village is slaughtered, so we can meet the family and know how the church of light destroyed the MC's life.
  The church itself. How did it gain followers since
• A Talking RockRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  well basically as my title says, it's not very good grammar, even for this site, and the talking and general pace of the story is kinda trash too. just gave the story two starts since I couldn't tell if it was amazing or bad.
• Mighty MoushieRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  I tried to read this, but couldn't get over the grammatical mistakes. Thinking it might just be first chapter jitters, I jumped ahead to chapter 21 and there was no improvement. I can't comment on anything story or plot wise, as I didn't read enough.