Ascendance

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Description

Born in a poor family with no friends only bullies, Sven died not of suicide not because the bullies killed him an "unknown creature," killed him.

That creature attacked his school starting with him, he desperately tried to fight back but he failed and died but because of him the creature had been weakened and thus had to flee.

the gods saw his potential and decided to give him a chance

This story has spirits and gods of mythology in it

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Returnee

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Followers: 1
Views: 377

Chapters(7 total)

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RznRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The prose here is the main issue, along with the word choice and how it is presented that makes this a rough read. The premise is moderately interesting, but it could be significantly improved by fixing up the prose and avoiding the use of fancy words for banal things. Producing instead of writing. Don't use literally, figuratively, and don't dance over the basic functions of a calculator when the precursor tables and such are explainable to a child, much less someone capable of making their own abstract reality of math. It is contradictory and for something that is based on proofs and exactness the stance is not only awkward, but nonsensical given that the restrictions of perhaps regular calculators is the limitation of their operative functions that you'd want to go to. Low hanging fruit and all. This was okay, but the presentation suffered from the missteps.