Ascend

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In every story there is always a villain. This is a story of a villain. But as the saying says, “Nobody is a villain in their own story. We're all the heroes of our own stories”. He lost everything. Can he overcome the challenges and ascend?This is a story of a villain character from Chinese Novel. I think once you read you will know from what novel. This is a fanfiction, hope that you will go easy on me ^.^,,

Chapters(83 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • JamalCheat2Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    For my money, the best parts of this story are definitely the use of the system, skills, and classes. I really dig the classic class and skills system but with a hint of cultivation style learning the Mc has.
    I'm still not sold on the tone of the series but there are some hints that look promising. It hasn't been overly preachy with any concepts or beliefs.
    Overall, I'm really enjoying this one. I hope to get a little more of the MCs personality and quirks though. I feel he doesn't strike a concrete image or feel while I'm reading.
  • amatomRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I like this story but the It needs an editor too help witte the grammar  . . . . .  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .x. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .x.x.x.x. . . .x.x.x.x. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .x.x. . . . . . . . . . . . .  .  . . . . . . . . . .x.x. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  .  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.xxxxxxxx. .x..x.x
  • EstanforthRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Honestly, it wasn't a bad read by any means. The grammar was decent, which is sometimes a godsend on RR, but the sentence structure is very stiff and although not always incorrect it can be difficult to read.
    The other problem was the non MC characters. Everyone just seems like a cardboard cut out of a person I've already read. They're uninteresting and frankly annoying to read.
  • GaskRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    Edit: Let's try this again; this review had previously been deleted due to "spam".  If quoting a part of this fiction verbatum counts as spam then you might as well delete large chunks of the story too while you're at it. That aside, the quote is necessary as it highlights much of what is wrong here in the simplest way possible.  In any case those twelve lines of text exist in a spoiler now so read it at your own peril, you've been warned.
    Review: Usually I feel the need to read more before leaving a review. But in this case I'll just quote chapter 7 as it's representative of the work so far, you be the judge.
    Kill goblins:
    [Demon's Fighting Instincts gained a level]
    [Demon's Fighting Instincts gained a level]
    [Demon's Fighting Instincts gained a level]
    [Demon's Fighting Instincts gained a level]
    [Demon's Fighting Instincts gained a level]
    [Demon's Fighting Instincts gained a level]
    [Mana Circulation gained a level]
    [Mana circulation gained a level]
    [Mana circulation gained a level]
    [Axe Mastery gained a level]
    [Axe Mastery gained a level]