Arms Dealing In A Ruined World

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Description

A great and distinguished human being once said that “We do not need guns and bombs to bring peace into the world, we need love and compassion.” But, what if you found yourself in a Lawless and apocalyptic world. Are Love and Compassions truly enough to bring peace or do we need to add a little seasoning of Guns and Bombs?

Jonathan was originally a small weapons dealer that only cared about two things in his life, selling weapons, and women. Due to his profession as an arms dealer, he was always shunned by society and labeled as an evil being. However, on a fatal day, he was shot and killed by the same guns he had sold. Nonetheless, his journey didn’t stop there.

Watch how Jonathan becomes a well-known weapons dealer and made the world a "better place" with the same weapons that most people despise in his original world after transmigrating into an apocalyptic world with an ultimate weapons system.

However, before that, he had to deal with a tiny little problem. Ohh God, why the hell did I transmigrate into the body of a hot smoky woman, but wait, why does my little "brother" is still here?

First of all the cover isn't mine and all the credits go to the owner. As you can see, this is a rewrite of a little project I used to work on years ago. English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar and shit.Also, the picture isn't mine and all the credits goes to the artist that made this amazing work of art.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Nimero

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 187
Views: 39,724

Chapters(28 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Shura2020Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I don't see why all the hates. I think it's a pretty good story and it has great potential, especially the weapon system. It's true that there's some mistakes here and there, but it's pretty readable.
Though i didn't like how the author was still calling the Mc by his real name before transmigration, I also can understand the idea behind it.
it is a pretty good and fun story. I suggest you give it a try and see it for yourself. Who knows , it might end up being your cup of tea.
So far, I'm enjoying it. The only downside for me is the slow and chaotic release rate. I just hope the author could post more regularly and also had schedule releases rate. That way, we can know when the chapters are posted so we don't have to keep checking to see when there's a new chapter.
RE DruinRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The premise of the story started well, if a little abrupt, and then went careening sideways with continued mistakes.
This is a system story, and the center of such a story should naturally be use of the system. Instead, we're treated to a juvenile combined-gender shemale trope that is done to death to justify looking like a woman and desiring other women, and the author even refuses to allow the MC to change 'his' name to 'her' new identiy, even though the System she is using does so, and her little sister calls her Big Sister.
Just, ugh.
The small but constant and repeated grammar mistakes and lack of ability to properly format conversations doesn't help matters, and the jarring juxtaposition of the character constantly being called 'Jonathon' and 'him' is just story-cracking as things progress.
I'm not sure how the author intended to justify the continued existence of zombies with the continued slaughter of them at the rate it is happening, but as a worldbuilder, unless something is actively creating new zombies all the time, at the rate they are being extinguished, they would have long been exterminated. It was another weak point for me.
Seeing Fem-Shep on the thumbnail did draw my eye, but the weaknesses in the story have thrown me off and I am dropping this story. Black Widow homage only goes so far.
Advice to the author: Redo the story. Completely drop the shemale aspect, it does nothing for the story, and is not cool or edgy. Women kissing women is fine, just gloss over the sex with the 'behind closed door' approach, there's no need to have genitilia involved. The whole male merging with the object of sexual desire is completely overdone and stale, and confusing genders does nothing for the story whatsoever.
Give the depthless little sister some character if you want to include her. Embrace the new name and gender with the new identity, or completely abandon them (and the little girl).
Pay attention to your world-building. Details matter.
Use Grammarly before