Are you sure you are The Demon Lord?

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Diablo die four times before and reincarnated again as a powerful Demon. He also gains his former four life, skills, and knowledge. He rescued by a girl named Elisabeth, with her he started his new life. what he survives new life as a demon or he dies again.

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  • sanjupaswanmld2020Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I said you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise, it's a good story, especially for your main character, in your tag you do not put an action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting.
    four live and again reincarnated, not new just typical isekai novel, op mc, and town management I feel inspired by Tensei slime, again all demon and few human concepts, only one mc so story covers him most of the time, it's like first-person storytelling,
    style: you are new so it's acceptable you need to fixed your complex language.
    story: almost like every isekai, just former life power just new and story continue to future and every time future become elder so I like to know why that happens,
    Grammar: I told you very weak, few time I don't understand what you want to tell, you need to fix that.
    Character: One main character diablo and sub-main Elisabeth, and all sub-character, both diablo and Elisabeth chemistry I don't understand why she falls for him, because he heals her or makes her town better, but diablo character developing more rush in after 5 chapters. I think you want to finish it quickly but don't rush.
    well, keep it up.
    I said you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise, it's a good story, especially for your main character, in your tag you do not put an action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting.
    four live and again reincarnated, not new just typical isekai novel, op mc, and town management I feel inspired by Tensei slime, again all demon and few human concepts, only one mc so story covers him most of the time, it's like first-person storytelling,
    style: you are new so it's acceptable you need to fixed your complex language.
    story: almost like every isekai, just former life power just new and story continue to future and every time future become elder so I like to know why that happens,
    Grammar: I told you very weak, few time I don't understand what you want to tell, you need to fi