Apoch's Twilight

Self-Published

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Description

"Reincarnated Into My Half-Finished Isekai VRMMO Tabletop RPG"

Once upon a time, there was a boy named Bull. Bull fancied himself something of a writer and game designer, and had half-created a homebrew roleplaying game for himself and some friends called Apoch’s Twilight. It was a perpetual work-in-progress, as Bull only wrote enough to fill in whatever gaps he needed to run the game for his friends.

Then one day, Bull was hit by a truck. Bull should have looked both ways before crossing the street.

Bull wakes up at a character creation screen, with an AI prompting him to create a character. The name of the game he’s creating a character for?  Apoch’s Twilight.

Say what?

I plan to update weekly, give or take, while staying a couple chapters ahead for my Patrons. Thanks for reading!

-- Bull

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Steven 'Bull' Ratkovich

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYADVENTUREMAGICSCI-FIMALE LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
105
Views
22,824

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • NylanfsRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Disclaimer: I'm a friend of Bull's and a Patreon supporter.
    I'm liking the story so far, I recently got into the LitRPG genre (by recently I mean a yearish or so). I'm liking the character development, and the differences between the main protagonist and the rest of the players (No Spoilers!) is an interesting twist which I hadn't read yet.
    Bull has some professional writing credit so I'm interested in seeing how this story goes. Although if he does decide to publish it it will need some proofing, editing, and rewriting to avoid some trademarks. :)
  • ChillingbearRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    So lets just address this, the top review has 7 upvotes when the story says it only has 5k views O.o ... Not one to cast shade where there might not be, but it looks a little odd to me considering you rarely see that many upvotes on such a small view count.... ever.
    ON TO THE STORY!
    We have a typical dead reincarnated dude, but instead of it being real he is reincarnated into a VRMMO. And he rolls stealth archer of all the builds.
    Now I'm not a huge fan of any stealth/archery builds in novels as I feel their fights aren't that interesting when written down. Stealth archers are all about getting that instant kill or using traps to lure in prey and killing them while they are trapped. It just doesn't make for a very interesting read.
    This is just my opinion of course. I love playing stealth archers comps, but reading it is just dull.
    As for the rest of the content it is just boring in my opinion. We have gotten standard quests with standard awards with a MC being a good boi to NPCs.
    Just boring meh with a health dose of potential due to OP being a good writter.