Apocalypse : Judgement's Day [Rewrite]

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Description

Rewrite? well more or less~

WARNING : The author isn't type that have english as his main language, so beware of bad grammar and maybe some of you will see its unbearable! so if it's really make you dizzy when you start reading! you should drop this immediately and forget this novel has been exist in the first place.

Raven at his 35s, living boring live from his youth, nothing special in his life. Because of that he hoped something will change his boring life.

Some god did something to the world, and it's indirectly made his wish come true!

He didn't get mad or cursed this god, but he's grateful for what this god doing to this world.

Lets follow his life in this new changed world, will he become hero or villain?

No one know's what he will become!

Sorry for my bad grammar!and sorry if there's mistake in my story, i hope its not too bad!!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: MorViuM

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 113
Views: 10,930

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Dragoon331Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
I give this score because I find that your story overall is pretty good but with mistakes here and there. Some actions of the character make no sense such as why keep the stuff in the pendant if you are gonna equip it later anyways, so just get it over with when it's gotten.
Then there is the grammar the tenses are all wrong, you don't use proper wording to describe scenes and this is not including all those commas and things. The grammar problem plain out causes what could be entertainment to be turned into annoyance so I advise you use some kind of website like the free version of Grammarly to improve your story.
BlobRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Too many items and and for so many chapter not much has happened except him looking through items and his other cheats...
I really liked the first chapter but then it just became check item-stats-more items-stats and little conversations.
And im not sure if its because i didnt pay much attention or if its not rly mentioned but where is he exactly? a village?
ummm i would prefer if theres more action and description of it instead of he killed this and this and then that. And less listing of skills and what they do please gets rly boring.
good luck and sorry for the harsh review