Apathine

Self-Published

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Description

Demadara. A former slave, turned thief, turned apprentice, reaches out for the power to attain freedom absolute.

Ellyrie. A Sky Ship captain with a burdening lineage toes the line between duty and humanity.

And Serafin. A Guardian of highest truth, order and faith, wades through the rivers of death to deliver the destiny of her people.

Their steps shake the foundation of the empire humanity has been struggling to build, surrounded by the inhuman, the idols and the ancient gods at the end of the world.

For Ruin, Deliverance, or Triumph. No matter the outcome, Rightheousness prevails.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2021
Author: Beatrice

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 32
Views: 20,233

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Community Reviews(2)

BullerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
That it was very dramatic. From what I could gather, the author really was going for the dramatic side of things, going so far so as to make it so we could read the small pauses inbeween words when giving out orders. Well done on that, I guess.
Grammar was good as well. Cant decivevly say that characters are good, seeing as I only read to chapter 4, but I still liked what I read enough to follow the story. 5/5 from me.
elenaVRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Following a single protagonist is a staple form of story-telling among Webnovels. Occasionally, an author might decide to introduce two POVs following two different storylines. The author took the brave step and here we have a story following three different protagonist, each with their own priorities and yet their stories intertwine.
The writing style is on par with professional, established authors. There are few minor typos littered around but can be easily overlooked. The fight scenes were kept faily simple but that added to the charm of the story.
Now regarding to the story itself. The story is fast paced. Eventhough the primary three storylines seemed fairly simple, painted against the backdrop of an orwellian government or zealout faction in the Imperium controlling their citizens. Just when things seems to fall in place, the readers are provided cryptics hints on events at a bigger scale and the bigger players are pawns themselves.
The story in its present premise shows far more potential to evolve.
The characters, this is where the story telling shines. You might love them, hate them and mid story might even change you opinion of them. Without revealing any spoilers, one of my favourite character did something extremely unexpected and the best part, given their personality that is exactly how the character would have responded in such a situation. The thought process and situations leading to the actions were well described. In my opinion, not an easy task. The author has put in enough effort. Hats off to that.
The story is highly recommendable for readers who are seeking for a fast-paced action packed story.