Another Worlds Merchandise

Another Worlds Merchandise,

is anIsekai-Progression Games-Like World. Where our Protagonist Jack found himself reincarnated into. Luckily everyone else is playing too, like for ages.

In a world where you're the Newbie, finding your place among the people can be hard.

What would you do?

Which i basically answer with this Story of mine.

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Speech is in " Hello there ".

Thoughts of Jack are inWell ... that could have gone better...

Status Windows and Message will be in Pixel Art xD. Found a liking to making these, while doing something Hobby-Game-Dev Related. Probably going to change them up a bit, based on how good you guys can actually read these.

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The main reason I'm posting this is that I want some feedback ... and more eyes on it will probably find a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.

I'm not a native english speaker. So this is mostly for training and fun purposes xD.

AND this time i know i will be able to keep going past 100 Chapters.

Why? Because i haven't managed to write myself into a bad-end yet.

The only two reasons I'm not spamming these are. I'm going over these, again, to check for problems. + I'm adding Status Screens and Stuff. I really shouldn't ... but it's fun xD. Atleast i can fix most of the possible Issues that can pop up with those, quite quickly. Resizing stuff is easy. And Replacing Text too :D. Drawing these gets easy too, as soon as you got one down.