Another World's Homunculus

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Ellis Murrin died an unexpected death, but before he could experience the sweet bliss of eternal rest, a God-like being whisked him away. The God told a tale of another world in grave jeopardy and the need for a hero (or several heroes) to go there and save the people. It was looking to be a typical story of transmigration when suddenly, something unexpected happened.

Now, he finds himself standing in the middle of an ancient tomb, with a lineage that wasn’t exactly normal and a body that wasn’t entirely human.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: BlankDott

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,381
Views: 709,634

Chapters(89 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

BinLoxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'd say that this is one of the very few stories on this site that I actually say (out loud), "Shit, there's no more?!" When I reach the end of the available chapters. I REALLY want more.
MaliciousRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a diamond in the rough with high quality writing and story. there is enough progression, so you won’t get bored. There are lots of interesting beasts and new companions however i would like for some of the beasts and people that get close to the MC not to be just females but guys (human or beast) who can be close friends or subordinates. I really like how the beasts are given their own personalities and POV chapters. All in all I think the story is going in the right direction, hope the author can keep up the pace because I want more!
livetotellRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really like the story. the progression is a bit slow, but it's intersting so I didn't really mind. The characters are fun. The writing style is good, without any grammer mistakes as far as I can see.
I really recommend reading it!
JakylorhideRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like what im seeing so far :) Keep up the good work. Just be careful about chapter length and relaease schedules to keep people engaged.
Vic20Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like it, i would like it more if the mc was more into fullfiling the promise with alma, he seems rather dull, i get that he is not the smartes but he is very dum even with all those live an death match and also with the spear i am not a pro but even i know that you can use it has a blunt on the other side. And he dont even ask for some common sense of the world? Or is it posible that he became dum because is a homunculus?
SpiralBakaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Spoiler: Spoiler
Title: Another World's Homunculus
Genre: Action, Fantasy
Protagonist: a homunculus with an earthling's soul. strength maybe S rank. current powers: super strength, super regeneration
Setting: a fantasy world with magic and monsters
Tension Level: low-medium. mostly low.
Basic Premise: the protagonist, along with 8 other earthlings (probably earthlings) are sent to a different world called lull. but the demon king kidnapped the protagonist before they arrived, and the demon king gave the protagonist the body of a homunculus he made himself that have his blood. the demon king died right after that. his only request is to have a lot of descendant.
Chapter Content: how the protag travel in the forest, fight the monsters, meet a certain monster/beast that became his companion, use precious material to cook etc. right now he is still in the forest, so there is still some time until he meet other people.
Chapter Reached: 24
Personal Opinion: I like OP MC. so I like this novel. also, I like that the pace is neither too slow nor too fast. I think it's on the faster side, but I like fast pacing. although, if it's too fast there will be problems.
OninomadRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story is fairly good but the concepts that make it interesting are largely absent for over 30 chapters. The author wanted to the MC as OP as well as show growth, it's very good as showing the journey from powerful to overpowered for his crew but the MCs place in the world, his interaction with it and the world's reaction to him feel like the most compelling party of the story and yet he's complete isolated from the world. I'll be honest I was ready to stop it in place but the thought "what will happen when he reaches civilization?" kept me reading.
The_RahmanRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The comedy is good, the pacing is good for a slice of life story.
This story is nice, but it need some conflict to make it more interesting.
Also, i want to remind the author that living alone in the wilderness for a long time will be detrimental to a person's mental health and social skill. Many writers forget about that. please tell me if you have an explanation why he doesn't have any mental disorder despite the lack of social interraction.
(Sorry for my bad grammar)
J GuilhermeRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Writting style and world building are nice.
Like was mentioned, while I aprecciate the depth of the characters interactions the plot progression is horrible, it's like watching a race between a slug and a parapletic turtle, thousands of words and dozens upon dozens of chapters and feels like nothing happened.
I can barely judge the MC development 'cause all we had is he walking in the forest with a group of animals, no decisions that defines his personality and life long goals.
tyes77Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
What seems like an exciting adventure is really just MC walking through some woods for over 20 chapters. 3 years of walking. I'm going to drop this because its really dull and seems to be dropping rare monsters for MC to collect. *yawn* Not to mention they all seem one dimensional in thier worhsip of the MC