Annihilation System

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Description

Mark, Who was the Most Wanted and Greatest Criminal on Earth suddenly died in his cell.

But Mark, Who suddenly realized that he was not on earth.Got pissed off at the world and yelled

"WORLD!! I DIE IN MY CELL AND I DON'T GET ANY SPECIAL ABILITIES?"

Mark who finished yelling, Suddenly heard a voice in his mind

Initiating System Launch

Scanning The Hosts Soul

Scanning Complete

Host Received -(Annihilation System)-

Message from "??? "I'm Sorry for letting you die Mark, But someone destroyed the Life&Death System on our part, So we gave you a chance to Reincarnate and gave you a System to Annihilate Gods/Devils on your World. Please be warned, Mark this system can help you strive to survive in your world, but you can't kill us for this is a new system that we just made And we are not Gods we are Eternal Beings, So Have Fun!"

Mark who received the message got mad and said:"The One who let me die, I'll find you and give you a punch to the face."

Mark's Journey just started to Fight, Live, Kill, Rule to the Everlasting World of Gods!

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Hey Guys! First Time making a story or second time? I don't remember.

My grammar is somewhat crappy sometimes so; please don't criticise :)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
MysticCpt

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.9/ 5.0
Followers
150
Views
76,692

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • 洪大福Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Please add more chapter this is an interesting story...
  • gnarlytreemanRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    This story doesnt have enough world building filler, or emotional explainatsions. Repair it to have a good story.
  • MihosRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    *I have only read until 6th chapter*
    OK so let's start with grammar, grammar is bad and the dialogue is weird as it changes from 3rd person to 1st person, and I kinda don't get (fully) how the system works.
    Then the story, the idea (of this novel) is good but the pacing is bad, and does it really take a WHOLE day to kill 10 ants, so what I'm trying to say that it's weird.
    Now some miscellaneous stuff I found problems with, the chapters should be longer, the story is progressing too fast, and I feel like stuff takes way longer to do than it should.