An Ent-Like Existence

Self-Published

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Description

A weak little twig is wrapped up in circumstances far beyond its control, ascending from a simple stick to something much more. Despite this twigs low starting point, it has been given the potential to grow tall. The consequences of its creation will reach further than it's future roots may spread...

Please leave comments and a review if you've got time, I'd love for any critisicm, hopefully constructive, you have for me.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Bjorn Dragonwing

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 58
Views: 11,174

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

BinLoxRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I'm enjoying the story so far, but not terribly so. The story seems a bit disjointed so far - the woman doesn't seem to care after 20 minutes that the man died. Almost as if decades of memories and emotional ties just went poof.
The tree has, in total, been talked about in perhaps three or four paragraphs over the course of five chapters. You wrote more about wolves in one chapter than the tree in all five combined.
Still, I do look forward to more - to see if it gets better.