An Assassins Vengeance

Trained under the Elysian Kingdom to become a killer ever since he was a kid, Sylus is now betrayed by those who he cared for. Barely escaping from the Elysian Forces by the skin of his teeth, Sylus now plans to exact his vengeance on the place he used to call home.

This is my first time writing a novel so please criticize as much as possible. I know the beginning of this wont be the greatest but i'm hoping future chapters will be a lot better