An Animal in Sheep's Clothing

Self-Published

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Description

Synopsis:A simple nature-loving young man from 21st-century earth, is brought to a foreign world. Will he be able to survive a hostile world where sword’s, magic; mythical creatures are a part of every day?

Disclaimer: The image used as my cover, image is a free stock image from pixels.com that is not copyrighted.

This is my first novel and a hobby. I do not know how consistent my releases will be, but I will do my best, that is all I can promise. I’ve made a story board with ideas for a good portion of the novel already, I do not plan on having voting decide the course of the novels’ story but I am willing to change my novels’ story as it develops and critiques and comments come in on the quality of it. Constructive criticism is welcomed, thank you for taking a look at my novel.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Mauger

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 132
Views: 21,010

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

cromslerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Where should I start, because there is plenty i enjoy and little i dislike, so heres a few of the things i enjoyed about the book
first off, I applaud the main character for sticking to their beliefs.
secondly, finally a nonhuman protagonist who is not a spell slinger. don't get me wrong, I don't mind magic mcs, but a protagonist who fights gand to hand is just amazing, the world needs more mcs like that.
third, the mc doesn't go, "I used to be human, I must help them" and isntead does what they want.
As the forth point, I love seeing pompous gods get humbled, its funny to me.
The fifth praise i got for this story is how
Deaths name is gregory, I cannot get over this, it's perfect. It may be my broken sense of humor, but finding out deaths name was gregory actually made me guffaw.
the sixth praise is that the mc is not shy to kill, they understand that a battle is life or death.
Number 7 is that the dragon god is pretty cool
Section eight of this review is that im a sucker for werewolves
the only flaw I can find is grammar errors, but they're not enough to stop this novel from being a fun read.
props to you,
-cromsler
Peculiarflame86Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
An update to my old review! As of chapter 9 and 10, dialogue has been sanded down to a smoothness comparable to... something smooth? Bad metaphor I know. Anyway, it's a story deserving its four stars. Characters have gotten more developed and have motives and, more importantly, Emotional responses! They are people who do people things. Like us! Bad at comparisons I am.
Point is, author has shown a commitment to both the story, and their drive to improve.
Will re re review at a later time, most likely chapter 20ish
ReneeWolfRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The grammar and syntax within the first chapter kept me from being able to say more.