An Aircraft Carrier in a Fantasy World

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

Arco

• Discord Server
  Nov 25, 2020
• Revision
  Nov 25, 2020
• [Chapter 3: I'm an Aircraft Carrier?!]
  Nov 13, 2019
• [Chapter 2: What?!]
  Nov 5, 2019
• [Chapter 1: What? I Died?]
  Oct 28, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• Halowolf 117Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Very good idea kiddo and a brilliant story for an erlea writer
• smol snekRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  NC Story and OP MC keep it up :D
• Delta-4Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  i cant belive a middle schooler is writing this it makes me feel bad about my self but keep up the good work and i hope you make this a possible furture for yourself in this field (edit 2/18/19 some guy is a jerk and has down voted all the reviews not cool)
• RobotSamuraiRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  But make sure not to repeat the same table over and over again in the same chapter. Besides that little issue your story is quite good so far.
• Simbadude123Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  So, How do I begin. This is my first review and I though it would be good on this book. (I created this account to keep track of the books I read and review this book and help him out.)
  Let's Start with the grammar. It's way better than other fictions but not up there in the top 2000s on Royal Road. (Better than most I've seen.)
  Story? Differnt could be said but it also takes in a bunch of other things as well. Although, thje genre of being reincarnated is being filled as a monster or human it doesn't mean that object is. This is really good that people are thinking about something else than that slime thing.
  Character? Your average MC. Although, he is acted okay and acts pretty well. (For a middle schooler thinking college dude or something.)
  Style? Okay, but the thing that hurts it the most is the blue boxes everywhere. (Hes getting better at this becasue in chapter 16 is getting way lower.)
  Overall? A good read if someone want to wait a couple days for a chapter and a interresting book.
• Sanity ClauseRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  I'm giving up on this one, after 5 or 6 chapters. It desperately needs to be proofread/corrected by someone. The constant insertion of real-life comments is distracting and unnecessary. The frequent "blue boxes" are not only, not needed, there are so many of them, it's irritating. Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation... well, if a student gave me this to grade, I'd have to give it a D+ or possibly C-. Apparently, it's written by a 7th or 8th grader - he has potential, if he works at improving his language skills.
• deathmagicuserRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  I like the concept of your story but I just can't read it it because of the grammar keep up your work though and once you're older your writing will get better. ☺