America Brave New World
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On January 1, 2xxx, the United States of America was afflicted by an unexplained event.
Which scientists were in charge of solving and unraveling the problems that lead them to a new world?
Where are the eras and kingdoms of classical, post-classical, early modern, modern, and unknown?Is it still conceivable for America's civilization to lead to the best of the new world's achievements?
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- watisuname
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- Rating
- 2.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 10
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- 1,325
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Community Reviews(2)
- Trent.S.Royal Road★★★ 3.0I think many people forget in fantasy story is fiction and overthink while review story's. For example in many summoning story's there Kings Dictators. Many of these leaders or Kings or emperors hand to be tuff for there ideas from being destroyed. So war was more common. Fighting for there god or way of life.
And for many reviews who say not everything can be salved with violence. It depends. Bandits don't care for life. That why there called bandits or pirates.
As such I enjoyed the story but there's not enough to give an Advance Review. So slow down organize your story's and plan out main character and events. Good luck and have a good day or night. - SlynchRoyal Road★ 1.0Exactly as the title said, dear author. You need to dig in alot of things related on how a Functioning Government work, NOT just your own interpretation. Because if not, this will just another scrap at the ever growing barrel of ISOT Genres.
I suggest you should open a discussion forum, and try to do some serious research on major topic of Nation governing, BEFORE even attempt at this type of story.
And while at it, do read Summoning America for reference. It can be enlightening and pull you out of your high schoolers delusion of "everything going my way".
If you still have that stick up your rear, then the current ratings was people being nice. Ot should be lower because your Mary Sue complex.
Violent is the quickest way to solve problems, but Not everything can be solved by violent, and violent DEFINITELY not the best way to solve most problems. If the world we're living in were the case, we would be fighting with stick and stone in a radioactive wasteland by now, not sitting here, wasting time writing imaginative fictions.
And no, i won't rate your story high. It's so bad it won't earn me a rating, and you demand cash in for additional bad writing basically cringe people into voting your story at 1 star. Fix the problem, THEN ask for financial support.
I guarantee you wasn't pass 18 springs when try and writing this sorry scrap of a story. DO RESEARCH, dang it!