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Hiatus

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Immovable87

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• SaulaceRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  As of Chapter 20
  The plot is okay for the most part, although slow to develop, because the chapters are very short by Ch 15.
  I like the premise
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  Story starts out with a powerful ancient bored guy, who wants to start everything over, so he destroys everything, waits for life to develop, then merges with a boy: his soul twin.  His ego seems to have disolved, which is why I like the premise (for reasons... idk, lol)
  Needs a little editing.  I've caught a sentence or two with mixed tense, and a couple missing of's and the's.  Nothing to take away from the story, really
  It took about 50 minutes to get to chapter 20, so might as well see if you like it.  Although this isn't a recommendation, It's not terrible, and you may enjoy it.  Everyone's got thier own tastes.
  For those who are curious: The title is in Cebuano for some reason, "It's okay to fly away!" and the synopsis is in philipino, "Secret of the Bibo! Last but not least!"  (Whatever that means, lol)
  Edit:  Aah, there's a button for spiolers now...  sonofa...  lol