Alone Time Traveling

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Description

5 years in the past, World War III started causing thousands of deaths and letting glacier monsters roam free across Asia to kill the rest of the remaining humans, so Japan and South Korea made an alliance to save as many people as possible and make them helpers of mankind, Song Ji-hoon is one of them, who after some events that made the Korean organization hide him for a day decided to send him 9 years ago to save the world.

Expect

- Overpowered MC (Not completely).

- Gore Action.

- Gore scenes, Blood and torture.

- Time Traveling to save the world.

- Continue to gain power.

- Amazing abilities.

- Plot twists.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Kyozkke

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 3
Views: 2,683

Chapters(12 total)

What readers say about Alone Time Traveling

“*Overall: It has an intriguing plot with the protagonist Ji-hoon. I found the story foundation engaging, with gradual revelations adding depth to his character. The pacing was fine although a little confusing sometimes. The potential for an engaging story i…”
Lucian T. EinarRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“The first three chapters of the story introduce the readers to the protagonist, Ji-hoon, and prepare the road for an intriguing and suspenseful story. Abilities are very cool and they are revealed gradually, which I really liked and by doing that the writer…”
Stark GottoRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

Lucian T. EinarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
*Overall: It has an intriguing plot with the protagonist Ji-hoon. I found the story foundation engaging, with gradual revelations adding depth to his character. The pacing was fine although a little confusing sometimes. The potential for an engaging story is noted, I believe there's a lot of potential.
*Style: The story unfolds with World War III setting the stage for a bleak world where humanity is on the brink of extinction. Ji-hoon's involvement in a secretive organization and his subsequent time-travel mission to alter the course of history create a compelling narrative full of twists and turns. The tension builds as Ji-hoon faces adversaries and uncovers mysteries that threaten the future.
*Story: The story follows Ji-hoon, a character sent back in time to save the world, facing challenges and mysteries along the way. Ji-hoon's encounters, decisions, and the unfolding plot create tension and anticipation for readers. The narrative promises action, suspense, and character development.
*Grammar: The narrative would benefit from consistent spacing and formatting to improve readability. Additionally, incorporating speech tags in dialogues can help clarify the speakers and enhance the flow of conversations. Ensuring a consistent tense throughout the story, especially in the narrative sections, can enhance the overall coherence of the writing. Regarding grammar mistakes, I didn't find anything of notice.
*Character: Song Ji-hoon emerges as an intriguing protagonist, grappling with inner conflicts and external threats in a harsh and unforgiving world. His development and interactions with other characters showcase a multi-dimensional personality that keeps readers engaged and eager to see how he navigates the challenges ahead. Supporting characters add depth to the story, offering unique perspectives and contributing to the overall richness of the narrative.
I recommend writing a longer blurb. Not needed but encouraged is to write a "What to expect?" section on the de
Stark GottoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The first three chapters of the story introduce the readers to the protagonist, Ji-hoon, and prepare the road for an intriguing and suspenseful story. Abilities are very cool and they are revealed gradually, which I really liked and by doing that the writer adds some more story to our protagonist which adds depth to his character and raises some questions about his true nature.
The pacing of the story is well-handled, with each chapter building upon the previous one to advance the plot and the characters. The writing style is also descriptive and very immersive, I liked it!
Overall, there is a nice solid foundation for an engaging story, it lacks nothing so I am very eager to continue reading it!
Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds in the future chapters!