All World Online
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Damien Close, age 19, becomes a quadriplegic after an unfortunate car accident, losing all function of his body from the neck down. With his parents in shock and his best friend suffering from unbearable guilt, Damien finds himself without much support. Being unable to even take his own life, Damien struggles to get past each day, looking for something to live for. With every passing day, Damien becomes more solemn and impassive. Three months later, Damien has almost given up, but to his surprise something unexpected happens. He is given the chance of a lifetime; to take part in a study focused on researching the effects of VR games on quadriplegic patients.Authors Note: If you find that the dialogue from the prologue to chapter 5 seem to be not that smooth, I apologize for that, it was my first time writing a fanfic so the dialogue was not in a format that is ideal. However, due to reader comments and some research I will try to attempt to improve the dialogue from chapter 6 and onwards. I may or may not come back to edit the first few chapters since I would have to rewrite most of it and I would rather spend that time writing out more of the story.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- ChocolateStyle
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- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 149
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- 48,549
Chapters(13 total)
- Chapter 8: Slime SaverNov 6, 2015
- Chapter 7: ProgressOct 16, 2015
- Poll: What type of mount?Oct 9, 2015
- Chapter 6: Venturing Forward (Unfixed Dialogue)Oct 4, 2015
- Poll: Esla's future developmentSep 22, 2015
- Chapter 5: Preperation (Unfixed Dialogue)Sep 21, 2015
- Chapter 4: Furry Ally (Unfixed Dialogue)Sep 16, 2015
- Authors Notice: Kinda important, but not reallySep 5, 2015
- Chapter 3: Tasks and More Tasks (Unfixed Dialogue)Sep 4, 2015
- Chapter 2: Slimy Adversary (Unfixed Dialogue)Aug 30, 2015
- Chapter 1: All World Online (Unfixed Dialogue)Aug 27, 2015
- Prologue: A New Beginning From the End (Unfixed Dialogue)Aug 11, 2015
- Introduction, please read the bottom portion atleast. Please :)Aug 10, 2015
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Community Reviews(3)
- TuffiRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Excellent writing. Cute pet(s). Cool MC without any wierd traits. Looking forward to evolutions! Want to read more!
- deuszurichRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0But pls pace it a little bit faster than insania and age of heroes since those fictions talk about day by day activities of the MC i hope its a little bit faster than that hope you enjoy writing this fiction so it continues for a long long time
- FairskyRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Your series is off to a good start, but I think one of the big things you can do to improve the quality of your writing is to use quotation marks and he said/she said to make it a smoother read.
Also, you should probably not just call everybody by their initials. Using full names increases reading immersion, and its only really an extra couple minutes of writing.