Airbound

Self-Published

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Description

“Rinstle, Rinstle Bale” is the only name which is on my mind, a beautiful and gentle name just that girl whom I loved so dearly, the only treasure of my life, whom this world stole from me. That’s why I burned it all, burned this entire world with my flames. I took my revenge from this world, but what good it did to me, I’m still lonely, this hole in my heart won’t disappear. “I will have her back, I will find it, I will find Airbound and change everything.”

NOTE-

Chapter length between 2000 to 3500

Proofreading and Editing in progress

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
himanshu baranda

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYSUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTPSYCHOLOGICAL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.9/ 5.0
Followers
56
Views
31,412

Chapters(24 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • Mxz111Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I like the story, Its something completely different.
    Style
    the style of author is neat, the way he presents thing his easily understandable
    Story
    It is the main thing which hit me, the way story is proceeding it looks dependable and good for a long run, though very few progression have been made after so many chapters
    Grammar
    I find the text to be easily understandable, in beginning it was average, but as the chapters are proceeding the grammar of author is also improving
    Character
    The only problem is that sometimes description of characters is not up to the mark, there have been a lots and lots of characters so far, which makes an appearance and then don’t show back, the probable reason could be that the story is going slow and they might appear later on.
  • SedactiveRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Edit: Ok an description has been added ~  thx for the trouble i will fix mah score i havent read the story so i will give a duplicate score of 4 stars like the other reviewers till i read it myself.
    I wanted to know the basic description of this story to see if it is something i want to read.
    But there is none so yeaa.... i wil give lowest stars till this gets fixed or the author has a good reason as to why he hasnt made a description.
    So i will fix my star score at that moment.
  • Yashashva BansalRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Well I know I am not good at reviewing any story but still the following review is my choice. I hope nobody fell offended.
    STYLE
    I like the style, it is a decent one. It don't complicated sentences and expression or words. It is plain , simple and easy to understand.
    STORY
    Story is quite good till now. Author has tried to offer something new to the readers which I really liked.
    GRAMMAR
    I am not a teacher or professor of Grammer. I too don't know a lot but from the little I know I think I only find some little mistake here and there but it doesn't effect the story. So, In my view Grammer is quiet good.
    CHARACTER
    I like the character development but still not much.  The characters have lot of potential but the development or description about the character is not up to the mark. As in one of the chapter author has mention about ishan friends but he have not explain there personality, characters, etc.
  • MattajRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    The story outline looks alright but for me there are too many descriptions and too much going around the bush. I was so bored after 2 chapters that I stopped reading.
    Giving so much detail is alright but you should work on a style to make it interesting. Yours is more like a book than a novel.
    And how could you mistake opposite genders like he and she? This mistake cannot be explained even for beginners in English.