AGENTS

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Status

Hiatus

Author

Starr Light

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• MikeRangRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Agents is a suspenseful piece of fiction that combines action, mystery and character driven storytelling to create a compelling narrative about the CIA that uses highly skilled agents to deal with a treat posed by a mutant army. Early on, we get into a deadly confrontation with a mutant monster, which kicks off the entire thing. The plot is effective to build tension and moves well between different settings and characters. There is some contention between the agents as they all want to be the best or solve a problem their own way, but this individual approach isn’t always optimal, we see early on.
  Thematically, the story bears resemblance to the movie Men in Black (MIB), with nonchalant overconfident agents trying to deal with threats in an over the top manner.
  While engaging and entertaining, the story could benefit from a tighter focus on pacing. Some action scenes feel slightly rushed, with the moment to moment play benefiting from better detailing. Some more initial exposition of the setting would also help to capture initial interest.
  Overall, the story is an exciting blend of action and sci fi, with interesting powerful characters and an intriguing plot and setting. Looking forward to see where this goes next!
• ZacheasRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  pretty engaging story with very descriptive writing. The story is good though it could use some refinement. please see my comments on the chapters for more details. I like how it started out with some action, a bit of mystery and good motivation for the characters. an area for improvement is to ensure the character's words and actions seem more natural, like how a reasonable person would speak or act.