Agartha (hiatus)

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

meet Marcus, unlike any baby, he was born aware. in a world where everyone tries to attain that elusive godhood that is supposed to be obtained if they complete their tree. enter the world where people awaken their abilities and and benefit the world or destroy it. Thumbs up for people who catches the discreet references to various items and characters XD Warning: Tagged 17+ for Gore, Violence, Sexual Scenes and Strong Language. AN: How strong can it be? the MC is just FIVE at the start of this story (will add more as the story gets longer)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: VoidPath

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 79
Views: 42,642

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

capbuzzkillRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Loving the story mc is great and spelling is not bad in my opinion but every chapter has a copple words missing letters or spaces
KoshmirRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
It’s not bad, but it’s not good either, or at least it isn’t for me. There are, in my opinion, three major problems:
The bad grammar, though it is getting better, so it will eventualy disappear.
The lack of dialogue, it may be the style of the author, but it’s not a style that i like, as sometimes it feels more like reading a summary than a story.
The lack of depth in the characters, most of the cast is plain to a level where you could trade the role of two characters and nobody would notice, they simply don’t have any characteristic, with the exception of Joyce, but even she is underdeveloped.