After the fall of the Dragon Age
Self-Published
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Description
When the era of the dragon is coming to an end, and when the magicians leave countless wealth and legends under the starry sky, one by one awakened young people begin to embark on their journey.
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Jackie Chan
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 21
- Views
- 33,711
Chapters(149 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- DrakoRemRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Disclaimer: my review might be unfair, especially because I couldn't get past the prologue. The story might get better later on.
I'll actually not talk about story and characters (they're too cheese for my taste though, like in some cheap anime) I'll focus on some points that stopped me from reading it from get go.
First, I gave it a try because of the very law average number of readers, staying at 23, when the book has 711 pages. And once I loaded the prologue, I understood why is that, it feels like the book is machine translated. Everything is messed, present tense is used along the past tense when the story is told. Punctuation is messed up too, word choice are weird sometimes and the sentence structure is messed and many more, in other words, it's incredible hard to read.
My advice, get an editor, a proof reader won't help you. If English is not your native language but you write in English, don't do it. Write in your language and team up with somebody who's fluent in English, it'll help the book.