Adventures on Planet Gana
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Join Henry in his seventh cycle of rebirth as he is forced to be born in another world as a commoner.
Old name: Living A Commoner's Life in Another World
Reason to change: story outgrew name.
The story is under pause as I brainstorm how to progress ahead.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Salt and Pepper
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 25
- Views
- 5,877
Chapters(13 total)
- Chapter 13. The new beginnings.Jul 11, 2021
- Chapter 12. Leaving TownJul 5, 2021
- Chapter 11. A Saint's ReturnJun 28, 2021
- Chapter 10. When a virtual world is more beautiful…Jun 21, 2021
- Chapter 9. Preparations!Jun 14, 2021
- Chapter 8. Treasure HuntJun 7, 2021
- Chapter 7. The Prophet.May 31, 2021
- Chapter 6. Kingdom's First Year Talent ShowcaseMay 24, 2021
- Chapter 5. Strengthening the soulMay 17, 2021
- Chapter 4. The Flowing Water CovenantMay 10, 2021
- Chapter 3. Exhibition MatchMay 8, 2021
- Chapter 2. A four-element MageMay 6, 2021
- Chapter 1. A very pristine white roomMay 4, 2021
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Community Reviews(2)
- librarysmilesRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The main character, Henry, levels quickly with a system cheat and loses his commoner status alongside his family.
This story moved through a quick gamut of parents, school, townbuilding, all the way to emo kid in only twelve chapters.
This story needs a slower pace, and more hope for a happy future in order to gain another star. - meerschaumRoyal Road★★ 1.5Struggles with internal consistency. Non sequitur plot, but cliched - and it can't decide what cliche it's doing. Characterization needs attention. Grammar and spelling are handled better than the storytelling. I don't want to discourage someone who seems to be someone very young who is trying; I think they could do better with planning and reflection.