Adventures of an Android

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

THIS NOVEL IS CANCELED!

I AM WRITING A DIFFERENT STORY RIGHT NOW,;STAY TUNED!Thanks to everyone who read my first attempt at storytelling 🥲Dying once is too boring.So our protagonist does it twice!Delvin Mayes lost his life in a revolution and and a cataclysm, so the 3rd time has to really be something else...Join Del as he ends up on a familiar blue planet whilst trying to find answers in a struggle spanning through galaxies and generals, moons and monarchs, deceptions and daggers, cloaks and courts.Joins us the Adventures of an Android.

[Participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
LGL

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICCOMEDYGAMELITMALE LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSIONDYSTOPIATIME TRAVELARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCETECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEERED

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
16
Views
867

Chapters(1 total)

Reviews

No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!

Community Reviews(1)

  • kanundraRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Opening.
    I really liked this, I think that it gives a great flavor for the character and the style of the author. The direction it might go.
    Story/style. Numbering your chapters helps me track things. Better, I got confused a few times where I was up to. Oops.
    Storywise it is pretty fast paced, I liked that about it, I am a screenwriter first and we’re all in when it comes to being dropped in and things get going. There were a few places I felt I wanted just that bit more info, and for it to be a bit slower.
    I’m no grammar guru, but there were a few things that tripped me up, just a good few passes here will help. Work out what you’re looking for in word for the edit and go hammer them down. Especially filter words. Things that stood out to me I pointed out on certain chapters, mostly to do with sentence structure and voice.
    Characters.
    Del is very interesting, he’s a lot going on and he seems strong enough to take it, that I liked. It helped a lot to see the supporting characters pictures and other things along the way. What I’d also suggest is taking these and finding the first time each of them is mentioned just to hone down their descriptions just a bit more.
    Closing.
    I read as far as I could, the system here is intense, and very well thought out. I wasn’t keeping up with any of the math but I know some people would. Overall a very fast paced story that I don’t think you’d have trouble enjoying. I’ll try and stop by again to see how this goes.  Thanks for letting me read.