Across the Realms [Dropped]

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A child blessed by the Astral.

An unprecedented destiny.

Watch his path, as he marches up the stairway of Heaven.

A March of a Sovereign.

[Adventure, Wuxia, Martial Arts, Fantasy]

This is aQihuan novel; it has eastern and western fantasy elements. More often than not in Xianxia or Xuanhuan there is a severe lack of character development, being a western writer I'm changing that. My characters,from my totally unbiased view, feel fleshed out and actually have emotions.

This is my first attempt at a novel, I'm writing as a means to better convey my thoughts. I will, hopefully, steadily improve chapter-by-chapter.

I'm very open to feedback andconstructivecriticism. As one can see this is a cultivation novel, so you know how this goes. I've decided to jump-start the whole rags-to-riches scenario. He is strong from the start and is given the utility to do so.

*The cover art is not my own, all rights reserved to the owner. I will take it down if necessary.

*The style of the recent chapters is comparatively different than Chapter 1.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Imperator

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICMARTIAL ARTSMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADMALE LEADWUXIA

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Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
428
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252,771

Chapters(50 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • DDclashRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is good, because:
    1) Author has a good grammar. I rarely spot misstakes(Well, editors work wonderfull too.)
    2) When you read this novel, you feel that author has a build world. At least its basis. He know what he wants from mc.
    P.s. I suggest you to start reading it, and then think: "Should I continue?"
  • StyxxRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Really great book, even if for a while there I thought you were gone
  • belkak210Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The novel just started so it's impossible to tell how thing will turn out but so far it has been great, the cultivation system is interesting, the background of the MC is good without it being too OP or needing to be removed.
    I'm also liking the MC and the other character so far but it's too soon to tell for sure.
    A bit of romance spoiler, if you want to know a bit about it
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    And if you are a harem hater, you're in luck as the author has said that romance will involve one or two girls, no more and if it is indee two girls, the three of them will love each other.
    And the grammar is also quite good, specially for RRL standards. They are a few mistakes here and there but nothing unreadable and the author will fix them if you point them out.
  • sloth of depravityRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Its eloquently written,grammar is clear,Characters are distinct and have their own personality,cultivation is put together well,and i hope to see it continue to get better as the chapters go by.
  • MajolemonRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I am in no way an experienced writer, but in my humble opinion, you focus a bit too much on the looks. The characters in the novel have emotions (so great job there), but I still find the story a bit superficial. First off, please stop explaining how beautiful/handsome he is every single goddam chapter because we get it by now - he's otherworldly beautiful/handsome.
    Second, it doesn't seem like the novel has any great challenges for him to overcome that isn't done so at the end of the chapter (except for his current problem Buddha and Devil problem), making any tension or excitement short, and after a few times, the novel becomes dull.
    Oh well, maybe wuxia novels and those with themes like it, just aren't to my taste.