Abyssal Domination
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He died a nobody. He woke up a child.But the man inside remembers everything.
Zageth doesn’t laugh, doesn’t play, and doesn’t belong. Born again into a brutal world of magic, caste, and war, he clings to one thing—control. With a stolen book of forbidden knowledge and a mind sharpened by loss, he’ll master the arcane or die trying.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- Raphsyc0
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- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
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- 9
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Community Reviews(2)
- SKNit3Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5It was a truly interesting story, and I enjoyed reading it. Any grammatical errors were swiftly corrected, and I didn't really notice any errors. The dialogue is also engaging and natural... I didn't notice any parts that felt particularly forced. The main character is also relatable and quite likable.
The story is an interesting reincarnation story. The MC, Brad, ends up dead and is reincarnated into a new world filled with demons and a great military setting to boot. Not only that, but he is also the... Yeah, I'm not going to spoil it for you so you might want to read to find out. You most likely won't be disappointed.
My only critique is that some parts of the story could be revised for any breaks in tenses. - ZeflonRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Honestly, you had me in chapter one with Krav Maga. The story is quite engaging, with a serious tone(though the author is not above making a few references here or there, assuming "Azeroth" was intended to be a shout out to the Warcraft universe)
This is a story about power, or more accurately accumulating power. What I like about it is that the training is not progression "my stats went up", but rather really nice, crispy physical action.
If I had any critiques it would be that the story maybe could use a bit of levity, but that might distract from the tone, which as I said, is serious.