A-Zero

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

BeeBaBoop

• Chapter 13: Box of Chocolates (New and Revamped)
  Jul 12, 2016
• Chapter 12: Youthful Naivety (Not Duel) (New and Revamped)
  Jun 27, 2016
• Chapter 11: Responsibilities (New and Revamped) (Not Duel)
  Jun 16, 2016
• A Huge Thanks and A Long (Heartfelt) Message
  Jun 9, 2016
• Chapter 10: Acceptance (New and Revamped)
  Jun 5, 2016
• Chapter 9: Rostar (New and Revamped) - Not Duel
  May 29, 2016
• Chapter 8: A Familiar Name (New and Revamped)
  May 23, 2016
• Chapter 7: Fifth Princess of Nozgo (New and Revamped)
  May 17, 2016
• A question for RRL Readers.
  Apr 21, 2016
• Chapter 9000: Psych! Just a Q&A
  Feb 9, 2016
• Chapter 2: Release?
  Jan 30, 2016
• Chapter 1: The Opening
  Jan 29, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• CandyManRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I like it. MC has a personality(rare i know), the details of the emotions are well written. Much better than it was before, the revamp was a great success. Please continue to write. :)
• FablecrusherRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  So this is my review for the first 10 chapters, not even mentioning the non-revamped version.
  First of all, the story itself. By utilizing a fairly original concept and the avoidance of most generic tropes, this story is a refreshing oasis in a desert of unoriginal and uninspiring content. Its uncommon setting with a set of believable and quite life-like characters, creates a riveting atmosphere that compels you to read onwards.
  The style is unnoteworthy, but not in the negative fashion. It is written in a way that you wont notice the style, as it is just a fluent sea of nice language. There are not many errors or things that stand out, making it a nice read that does not dilly dally with silly language structures that are not needed for the story and its emergence.
  The exact same thing can be said about the grammar, as it is also most of time correct and non-interruptive. This leads you to enjoy the story, instead of focusing on the errors and weird sentences that, sadly, so many stories here contain.
  The only point that I feel that still is lacking, is the character and his progression. It is obviously intended that there is still a lot of mystery around the MC, but he still lacks more descriptive emotions or, at least, behavior. More description on the setting and the world would also only increase the quality of this story, making this a nice point that the writer could improve upon in the future.
  In conclusion, I would definitely recommend this story to anyone that is either sick of the generic concepts and stories posted on this website, or to anyone that enjoys everything posted here as they will love this.
  In summary, I recommend this story to everyone, as it is refreshing but also a continuation and improvement of what has already been written before.
• IsignisRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  so far up to chapter 10 there has been nothing but greatness, the story feels smooth and has a good pace (just hoped the author posted more often XD) there is no info dump and the world is slowly introduced.
  the only thing is that we dont get a detailed description of the mc but just that his hair could be black?.
  I don't really know what but something about it feels so good and I crave for more.
  thanks to author for this awesome piece of literature.
• lulolRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I liked your story, so i'm dropping a little review. (Minor Spoilers)
  I like how you describe and use your characters. They are all nicely made and quite interesting, in every chapter, from Alice to the Prison guards and the demon princess.
  You story is cool, but not long enough to really be judged. I only regret some lack of drive and goal for the mc in the chapter from 6 to 9. He is just going along with the flow, and it's hard to relate to his way of thinking, in my opinion. Chapter ten do good in explaining a bit more his intentions.
  I like your style, and the way you describe things. It all flow nicely, while giving away background informations about the world.
  Grammar is okay. I did not notice any mistake, nothing kept me from enjoying it.
• BloodKingxRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The story is great, although I feel like he should have been confined longer for his current state of mind. Like frozen in time or ice or something, because just 10 years isn't enough, but overall its an awesome read. I'll update when the authors revamp is completed
• grinderotaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I'm sorry but that synopsis doesn't tell me if I want to read it....can someone give me a real synopsis that actually mentions the MC and whatever he/she/they are trying to accomplish