A Young Boy's Space Opera

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Description

In his first life, Jonny Raynor was a japanese sallary man. In his second, she was the magical girl war hero Tanya Von Degurechaff. But when the bet between his first life and god ended in a stalemate, the board had to be reset. Reborn on the planet of Mar Sara, its about to start all over again. War; in all its glory... and all its horror.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
Reynard69

Tags

ACTIONSATIREADVENTURESCI-FISLICE OF LIFESTRONG LEADGAMELITGENDER BENDERMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYHIGH FANTASYVILLAINOUS LEADCYBERPUNKGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDSOFT SCI-FISPACE OPERAPROGRESSIONDYSTOPIATECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEEREDFIRST CONTACTATTRACTIVE LEAD

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
33
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3,243

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • Stari0nFellRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I haven't ever in my life yet seen a Sago of Tanya The Evil fanfic on here, and because of that, I have to thank you. So thank you. I've always wanted to see something about that anime on here. It's always the more popular animes that get their fanfiction :,(
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  • WeavervaleRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Reynard 69 has written a thorough think piece that has me guessing..Star craft? Jim Raynors bones are in this. Or at least his name.
    Let's start with grammar 5/5
    The issue if any lies not with the grammar at all. This is clean prose and with some short explanation I can get most of the Expository passages. It's all presented well so kudos on that.
    Style 4.5/5
    This is coming from a place of love. This work I think could use some spacing out. Like get it so that it's not big chunk of text, break bigger chunk. That's easy to fix. Hard to find the right spots for that.
    Character 5/5
    Okay so I like the premise but it's like for me I think that he would identify himself as hideki throughout so that is a strong choice. But then when you are reborn as a woman, then you have new identity and all that, I guess your life changes. Tony has life now and he used to be Tanya... and she used to be Hideki. The callbacks are a nice touch especially the sloppy logistics one gave me a chuckle.
    The charactizations really shine here. Especially in the way that characters talk you get a feel for who they are.
    Story 5/5
    The story it is good.