A WORLD TRAVELLER
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Qin after goign to other worlds has finally ended up in the one piece universe.
Can White beard stoop his OPness ? " NO "
Can the world government stop his OPness ? " NO "
Is the world of One piece ready for QIN ? " NOOO OO "
Follow Qin on his journey to show people his OPness.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Qin Overpowered
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 13
- Views
- 17,195
Chapters(9 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- BetaowlRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The story overall is a good idea and if you keep it up your writing will surely get better, but you need to add more details to your story. You can't just skip huge portions of a person life, you need detail. How did this person get so strong? What tradgidies did this person face in life? What did he have to overcome to get where he is in life right now. That's what this story is missing. I like the idea behind the story and I feel that you could do a lot more with what you have.
It's a good start, but I believe you can do better. Keep on writing!!