A World Reborn

Self-Published

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Description

Tell me do you live so that you can enjoy life or do you live so that you can escape into another world of books, movies and games? There is something fundamentally wrong with a world if its inhabitants have to escape it by means of fantasy. However, what if reality became fantasy and your actions have consequences, would you still like it?

follow John as he adventures through perilous dangers, deceit and death in this reborn world.

This is my first novel, so please be gentle with me. There might or might not be sexual content, depending if people want it, but I still put up the warning for now.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: ADO

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 171
Views: 57,250

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

OsbymusPrimeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great story so far....love the pack mentality and am looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Mash_PotatoesRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
While its not the best nor is it the worst one out there on RRL in my opinion it certainly could use some fixing.
While the plot overall is fine it seems...lacking. While not often used as others there are still several other stories like this one and nothing really sets them apart from one another other than the characters and setting. (Though I do say this I hope you don't get pissed at me)
The character development has some empty patches here and there but if you have a some plan of gradually closing those patches as the story goes then I have no qualms over it
The background of the characters like John basically amounts to nothing but a few sentences While you do mention his parents and later on his uncle and sister and a certain part of his childhood you never went in depth with it or explain the level of their relationship other than the sister. While it may be to quickly progress the story not knowing the full story of John before "God" appeared certainly doesn't help me relate or understand your character all that much. The uncle on the other hand more or less seemed to be a useless onetime use side character to justify John being able to get a new gun and fuel.
Good luck with your story m8 and FYI I'll continue reading your story for the foreseeable future
SedactiveRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Ok i binge read this novel when it had 7 chapters out giving me a clear idea about what i can expect.
With this i don't mean the plot but the general what the peep is this all about.
Namely a Mc with werewolf powers and other tibids you just have to read the story for it if you want to know all about this shizzle wink~
As i already wrote several comments going from small to large and then to larger walls of text i will leave the final comment from chapter 7 here in a spoiler tag.
It basically sums up all the reasons why i give this novel 3 stars i want to give it less because i like the story but the plot holes and reasoning is just beyond horrible but i wil refrain from doing so.
I know this does not motivate the author i do not even know if he agrees but i am not here to make buddies with the author (T.T it would be nice if he/she likes my review even tho the above isnt that nice to hear/read).
But its what i do, bash people and then bash them some more... sad truth but if you cultivate int he way of the douchebag even for the good of the masses you need to understand that its a thankless job !!
Without further ado (edit fucking spoiler tag just smashes all the text together without alineas making it nigh unreadable.
I wanted to say just go to chapter 7 to read the same thing but i will paste it below without a spoiler tag so BEWARE SPOILERS BELOW I WOULD SAY READ IT IF U DONT MIND OUT OF CONTEXT SPOILERS.
Otherwise read only if you already ate the 7 chapters that have been released to either rate my review as bullshit or as something accurate and helpfull.
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Wasnt one of the people an army guy in the sheriff building who knows the Mc?
I am not talking about his uncle as he came out later but the one who first looked tru the slit in the door was a sergeant and as i remember this term is fromt he army...
So if a guy who had some training in the army ( i am refering to the Mc) can use a freaking sniper rifle (you need train