A World in Chaos

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

SteeLeeL

• Chapter 65: Cursed Spear
  Jun 13, 2020
• Chapter 64: A Gate and its Guardian(Part 2)
  Jun 11, 2020
• Chapter 63: A Gate and its Guardian(Part 1)
  Jun 9, 2020
• Chapter 62: Exploring the Dungeon
  Jun 6, 2020
• Chapter 61: Metal Magic
  Jun 4, 2020
• Chapter 60: Stuck in Consal
  Jun 2, 2020
• Chapter 59: The Kindness of Others
  May 30, 2020
• Chapter 58: First Mission
  May 28, 2020
• Chapter 57: Odd Jobs Jude
  May 26, 2020
• Chapter 56: Sparring(Part 2)
  May 24, 2020
• Chapter 55: Sparring(Part 1)
  May 22, 2020
• Chapter 54: Hope City
  May 21, 2020
• Side Story: Tom Ray(Part 2)
  Dec 28, 2019
• Side Story: Tom Ray(Part 1)
  Sep 3, 2019
• Chapter 53: Everyone's Decision
  Aug 29, 2019
• Chapter 52: Deal with a Demon
  Aug 27, 2019
• Chapter 51: The Situation of the World
  Aug 24, 2019
• Chapter 50: Contact with the Outside
  Aug 21, 2019
• Chapter 49: Left All Alone
  Aug 19, 2019
• Chapter 48: Golden Whip
  Aug 17, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• uupatrooper2Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Even if you don't like the first chapter (or two?), give it at least until you hit a chapter from the Mei POV. It's worth it.
  The characters in this story are just weird and broken in the best ways. They certainly aren't normal, but they're also very normal - or at least they would appear so. The MCs are introspective enough to allow the author to dive into their heads a bit, which is both interesting and helpful considering their oddities. But the author does a good job of keeping that side of things under control, so the story doesn't get stuck in their heads either. The characters also remain pretty consistent with their current-selves. They change with time and experience which is great, and they also don't suddenly flip a switch and become entirely new people.
  The tone of the story strikes a nice balance between being serious and humorous. The writing style is fairly serious - the narrator isn't constantly making jokes, nor do all the bystanders suddenly shout typical anime-trope lines in unison. At the same time some aspects of the character concepts verge a little on the ridiculous, but they're well tempered by otherwise being excessively normal.
  Overall, these are some of the more interesting and unique characters I've come across in awhile and it's a lot of fun to see them interact with each other. Really, just top marks here.
  The world is fairly interesting. It's not exactly novel as it seems to draw heavily on established ideas (zombies, faries, angels, demons, etc) but it's far from the typical setup either. A lot remains to be explored in exactly what is happening to the world, and the author has a lot of options for how to handle things. There should be a lot of room for using the wide variety of known monsters/etc, but using them to craft a unique setting. It should make for a nice mix of being immediately understandable and relatable, while also being interesting.
  Style and grammar-wise things are pretty well handled. There aren't any major formattin
• ForestRageRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Nice start to a fantasy story. A story well planned out to keep the reader following. A few grammatical errors which could easily be taken care off in the future with a grammar/spellcheck. Some parts are a little hard to imagine, as the bus driver in the first chapter having the time to mouth off a full sentence after seeing that angel looking dude. Similarly the lack of response from the passengers. Look forward to reading the updates to see where it goes.
• blaze262Royal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Story is good and I like all the side characters, but I can't get over the main character's sudden attitude change. He was a cold calculating character in the first 4-5 chapters then becomes a hot blooded meddler from then on. Just couldn't get my head around it and it ruins the story for me.