A Wolf's Way
Self-Published
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Description
One cold night a boy is left alone in a forest of magical beasts. Discovered by a pack of shadow wolves, the boy is taken in as one of their own where will his story go from here? ....................................................................................................................................................
Hey guys this is my first time trying to write a story, so it's not great, but I'd appreciate any constructive criticism or story ideas thanks a lot
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Autumn12
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 495
- Views
- 348,579
Chapters(62 total)
- Annoyance and freedomMay 22, 2016
- A little flattery goes a long wayMay 22, 2016
- ArroganceMay 21, 2016
- PreparationsMay 20, 2016
- ThinkingMay 20, 2016
- Let's see how this worksDec 12, 2015
- the best way?Dec 3, 2015
- Lucio vs LuposNov 24, 2015
- one month laterNov 22, 2015
- the first dayNov 14, 2015
- SummoningNov 10, 2015
- a demon in human formNov 6, 2015
- the testingNov 3, 2015
- the start of training and what came nextNov 2, 2015
- the first step on a long roadNov 1, 2015
- DecisionOct 30, 2015
- never trust a snakeOct 30, 2015
- the man in purpleOct 29, 2015
- chaos and carnageOct 29, 2015
- the hunt beginsOct 29, 2015
Reviews
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Community Reviews(8)
- PranayRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I think the story is good however the author just needs to work on the description of difference in power .
- Father of calamitiesRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Really goood story; fun to read; i'm really impatient about his next summons
- RuneionRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0fun to read, something good to read to pass time
- alexanderyouRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0But I definitely recommend getting someone to proofread it. There are numerous places where words are misspelled, spaces are missing, etc, and proofreading would make it a much smoother read for new readers.
- CreatureDukeRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Yeah, this is a good story to read.It WILL need a proofreader at some point if you want to increase the amount of readers.
Thanks for the interesting story.My only need I think for this story is that you don't go with the clasic over powered beasts like Dragons. They can be over powered just not a common one. Maybe a Griffon would be cool or a scorpion, heck maybe even a tortoise and a Kraken and finally how about a rhino...? Rhino would be cool - Forgiv3n324Royal Road★★★ 3.0Alright now your story is not perfect, which is stating the obvious because I doubt any store can claim perfection, but there are some out there that come pretty damn close, unfortunately I do not believe yours is one.
Though the Introduction may be a little harsh, but I mean no offence just merely stating my opinion.
Alright now lets get into the actual review: Your style lacks for lack of better terms any real capturing abilities and I believe that in order to improve your style it would take multiple attempts at writing stories and constantly trying to find your ‘vibe’ to make your work feel like your own and not like many stories that have that standardized type of style to it which I feel your style even comes a little short of if not just because your grammar gets in the way of capturing your readers or at least for me, my attention.
Your story I think is the strongest point you have going for yourself, you have the mysterious heritage going on, the summoning of ridiculously famous and ancient characters to give bonus mystery and my favorite part you did not instantly introduce a pair of titties and ass to accommodate our MC’s dick. Now so far in the story you have only introduced the most likely heroine of the story, but nothing is set in stone yet obviously, but I rather like how you have slowly introduced her and I hope you do not rush this and create some cheesey/cliche love that would seem forced between these two. Other good points in your story is that your MC while it seems he is very strong for his age also shows INTELLIGENCE and RESTRAINT which I’ve noticed a severe lacking of in stories with strong MC’s lately so bravo.
Now its been a few days since I last read a chapter so I cannot from memories pull up an example of your grammar mistakes but from memory your story is readable (This I know cause for those stories in RR that just have absolute shit grammar I don’t even read past 2 chapters) So your grammar is not you know elementary level shit, but - frostkingRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Really good so far besides grammar mistakes but for the future of the work try and hold off on the romance till he's at least 16-18. No need to rush that part of the plot to much he is still a kid and from how he's portrayed so far loves not in the future for someone that not only disdains humans humans but hates them completely
- Nehpets747Royal Road★★ 2.0The story needs to add some world background an maybe a bit of romance to spice things up. Good story and good luck. I am currently giving it a 2 star but will change it after 25 chapters, if the story is uniquely told that has weight on it.