A System Inherited! [LitRPG, World Building, Female MC, Strong to OP, Xianxia like]

Self-Published

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Description

Adya and Anya two pairs of twins come from very different worlds. One set from a technological civilisation, one set from a cultivation world.

Through an accident of chance and magic, all the souls are merged and reincarnated in an older universe.

Now baby Adya, with the memories of all 4 has to make her way through the world. There is only one problem. Somehow, she has ended up being recognised as a scion of the progenitors, the ones who created the system!

The system will test and limit her to ensure she is worthy of inheriting the system.

Everyone else in positions of power, will fear her coming and will do everything they can to stop her rise. If she becomes recognised as a true inheritor even the gods will be under her power.

A journey of a girl born into a new universe where almost everyone is against her. Adya struggles to claim her birth right and recreate the System and the universe a new.

Chapter will drop most days as they are written. The plan is to release 5 chapters a week M-F.

What to Expect

An actually intelligent female MC

Anti hero lead - She will do what she wants and needs to do

Pragmatic MC

Challenges will be from others and not all in the MCs head

[Winner of the Royal Road Writathon challenge October 2024]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: MentalLogic

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Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

Cloaky47Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story is an Isekai but better with cultivation, a system that is original compared to others. The story is like a fresh breath, it is LitRPG but it is original, it focus more on the story and not on the system, it's well balanced. Overall good story, good writing and the story captivate readers.
Quinn VoidheartRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story stands out by positioning its protagonist not just as a system user but as a potential system inheritor with the power to reshape reality itself. I also really appreciate that she still cares for her family
Style:
The author handles the complex narrative of a character with merged memories from four different individuals. It balances the technological perspective from one set of twins with the cultivation of knowledge from the other, creating an enjoyable xanxia world.
Story:
The stakes are immediately established with the revelation that power structures, including gods themselves, see the protagonist as a threat to their authority.
Grammar:
The grammar has been good so far, even with all the system stuff.
Character:
Adya is a compelling anti-hero protagonist, whose merged memories and experiences create a unique perspective on power and its uses. Her pragmatic approach to challenges feels natural, given her complex background, and her actions are consistently driven by clear motivations rather than plot convenience. The story still manages to keep up with the character's familial needs through fun times with her family. She doesn't just sever her mortal ties and leave them behind.
World Building:
The world is a great setting for a xanxia story and I enjoy being there for it. The technical exploration of the xanxia setting is always appreciated. I like not having to slow of a start either, I have read way too many starter arcs and am glad the MC knows what they are doing. Well, at least thinks they know.
SachiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It is an intriguing blend of high-concept sci-fi and cultivation fantasy. Adya's journey as a reincarnated entity navigating the overwhelming weight of memories, a new universe, and a powerful system introduces captivating philosophical and strategic dilemmas. Her pragmatic approach to splitting her identities adds depth, making this an intense, thought-provoking read.
Underdog_005Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
All I can say is that everyone should give this story a try as it's a masterpiece that's literally on a whole another level.
One of the best I have read and that's when I have read many different genre and language type stories.
With over thousands of stories read, it's very rare for me to be impressed by a story and while not much of the story or at least the part I have read showed originality. The author has somehow made it that the story was amazing and satisfactory unlike any others.
I can count on my hands the number of stories that I had as much fun reading.
MerciRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm enjoying reading this book, it has an interesting premise and a decent flow. The MC is interesting and the world is as well. Hopefully the world building will continue to grow. I love the idea of remembering past lives and enjoy the many different ways and this is one of the most interesting so far.
Ninmast NunyabizRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is very similar to the author's other work, A Modern Girl in a Medieval Cultivation World. There are a lot of points of crossover, even adjusting for them both being Cultivation stories. The main character of Adya uses past-life experiences to make technological and cultivation leaps despite a very young age (she spends most of the story at age 5).
It differs from MGMW in that the stakes are higher. Adya has more to lose than just her life, as she has a family to think about, and she is far more actively hunted by powerful enemies that she can't hope to challenge if they find her.
Grammar is about the same between the two series. Nothing that derails reading comprehension, but it still could afford a run-through with a check for punctuation and reuse of words. I suggest using a reading app like Natural Readers to check for such things.
The story and characterization are where it exceeds MGMW. With higher stakes and less coddling, things feel more intense and ever ready to spin out of control. And while Adya is still the character that matters the most, there is characterization of all supporting characters, with glimpses into their thoughts that make sense with their actions. The only thing I could say is that Sai and Mai need a little more work. Even though they're their own personalities, they don't go out of their way to define themselves.
In short, if you enjoyed A Modern Girl in a Medieval Cultivation World, give this a read. If you've read through this one and enjoyed it, but haven't checked out MGMW, you really should.
PolarisFxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Authors other story was so good the second I caught up, I moved onto this one. This one is just as awesome as the other. I don't really review much as I'm generally a negative Nancy and RR's position of be nice or don't bother doesn't sit well with me, but I really can't find anything negative to say about this story.
So many authors writing similar stories try to do too much as a child, and overlook the narrative power of the simple time skip. I hope we get another time skip once her sect is in place.
Now I move onto the third story, hoping for a trifecta of perfection.
uxelRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This novel is a mix of the cultivation genre and litrpg genre with hard numbers.
The novel has a bit of a business focus undertone but its not too much. It contains plenty of the slapstick cruelty thats expected from a cultivation novel. So far there are no issues with world building or anything overtly ridiculus happening.
MC is probably going to eventually become very op, when that happens it will be very intresting to see how author manages to keep up the stakes of the main plot. So far the stakes mainly are that mc isnt op yet and there are bigger fish in the pond out for her. I like this so far and will see how it develops.
Overall this is a solid read if you like litrpg and cultivation, plus the tropes that come with them.
Corwin6765Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The author is trying to juggle three stories at the same time and it is dragging them down. Each started out very promising but eventually devolved into a list of events that happened. The soul of the story was lost. I believe that any one of them could have been great, if they had been the soul focus of the authors focus.
I_Eat_GoldfishRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The story’s premise was enticing yet as promises and signposts appeared it seemed to overburden it’s integrity. Too many holes were being created without enough answers. Not enough perspectives were being considered due to events the main actor involved herself in. The pacing is too fast for the volume of consequences that are presented. In the same consideration the pacing is sufficient enough to present an actual order-chaos cycle. Despite there being a slice-of-life tag there is actually risk being presented, which is nice. It means it’s a lie though. From the chapter that I stopped at there’s still more to tell. The suspense of chaos could go limp and then the tag would be true. I have a bias against reading this genre because it’s usually not done well.
One thing that will stand out immediately is the ridiculous use of an omnipresence ’system’. I disliked how it was used in this novel. Perhaps it would be enjoyable to others. One would have experience it to find out for sure. Also, the presentation of this system lessens after a long while. As in, being shown to the reader.
Another aspect of this novel is the behavior of the supporting actors. There’re not enough of them I think. Not enough differentiation and uniqueness are given to the supporting actors. It makes them unimportant.
A giant impression I experienced while reading this novel is the tone. The main actor is very self centered. There’s a lot of introspection. This impressed me with the view that there’s an abundant amount of ‘Telling’ and not a lot of ‘Showing’. This gives the readers a rigid experience without the freedom to deduce or interpret normal or complication interactions.
It seems like the novel is somewhat well written. It seems to drafted and published without much spelling errors. I would say it needs more editing and proofreading though. It is good that the story itself exists. I can see there is care that went into it. I just think there could be more.
I didn’t write this review well.