A Sundering of Magic: An Elemental Progression Fantasy

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Description

This is how the world dies. When Kaden saves a trapped dragon, he unknowingly binds himself to them for life. Granted magic from an ancient source, Kaden is now a rare dragon rider. Thrust into a world of magic and politics he never knew existed as a rural farm boy, all he's trying to do is survive. Mystical forces and manipulative people pull at his senses, trying to mold him into their own dancing puppet.

Darkness is rising and kingdoms are falling. Kaden will have to fight for his life to not fall with them.

A Sundering of Magic is an Elemental Progression Fantasy with DRAGONS. Because dragons are very important and must be added to everything.Just add dragons!

(Tu and Thu) Updates(Chapters are 2000+ words)Season 2 baby!

This story includes:

- dragons- elemental magic- progression magical ranks- extensive plot (we're going for a good long while my friends.6 seasonsand a movie!)- more dragons!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
MythicalMiracle

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREMAGICHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
174
Views
120,959

Chapters(75 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • Tarrying_soulRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The world is unique, the power system has a dragon-sized addition(twist) to it.
    The characters (his companions) and antagonist are good and defined.
    I am excited about the world-building and how our MC's power gonna look in future.
    While some sentences did give me a pause, I can't judge properly as English is not my first language and I am still early in the story, so the author would have remedied it, it's not a big problem.
    GIVE IT A TRY FOR THE LOVELY DRAGON, AWESOME WORLDBUILDING  AND POLITICAL INTRIGUE.
  • CitronscotchRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The author seems like they have a clear picture of where they want to go, which is good. The story progesses smoothly, which is also good. And there are dragons, which, for obvious reasons, can't be bad either.
    But sadly the writing is still lacking. It looks immature, sentences are stiff, some characters sorely lack depth (thinking of the family in particular). Nothing that can't be corrected with time and more writing experience, but I definitely think those first chapters would deserve a full rewriting some day, if the author sticks to it. I hope they do.