A suitcase
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A story about a suitcase and the goings on around it.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- SAmai
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 1,051
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 2.5I am not entirely sure, but this might deserve a sensitive content tag given the pretty clear implication of what happened in the story and what will happen at the end. The story itself is simply written because of its suitcase POV. It gives enough to discern the situation, but at the same time it has mistakes in the prose and there was really no pressing need to split this across multiple chapters. For a two page short, this feels still a bit rough on the edges and the intelligence and perceptions of the suitcase seem to be hampering the narrative somewhat.