A Soul Bound Dragon
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There was a time when dragons were more than legends, a time when they walked the earth and ruled over the other races with ease. As history tells it, the greedy dragons could no longer reproduce with each other, and they grew weak as time passed. Biding their time, the rest of the world watched as they killed themselves off, until only a handful remained.The Great Dragon Purge is what it was called, the twenty year hunt and extermination of the remaining Draconians, costing nearly 60% of the worlds population, all but one of the beasts was killed.In a final battle, the strongest dragon became cornered by the masses and sealed himself deep underground in order to recover from his wounds...It has been over two thousand years since then, there are many rumors that say he is long dead, that even dragons pass after time..Me? I believe that he's still out there, and I'm going to find him!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- AspiringFrogman
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 101
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- 5,246
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- forgottenslayerRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0more advanced critique spoilers will follow
style: the style follows most of the beginner stories on this sight, it is a first person narrative that changes around without giving much information on what is going on, it keeps the tense and person right though there are no hints on who it is instantly.
story: interesting start though there is not much to snag onto at this point, we saw a huge battle that ended with the dragon king denying the enemy the satisfaction of the kill, but then switch to another person that does not seem to be related. transition wise it is early in the story and not much has been explained it leaves the author lots of room to maneuver,
Grammar: i am not one to speak on grammar, though there are issues present,
charter: it is early in the story at the time of writing details are lacking in the chapter, and it takes a bit to figure out who you are following, (ex: it took half of chapter 1 to realize that the person who pov it was was a girl, which caused everything to click.
in all the first few chapter leave a wide field for the story to develop though it could you a little TLC from an editor in regards to style and flow. I am interested to find out how this turns out.