A Skull Full of Souls

Self-Published

Description

A very strange skeleton begins telling his companions about how he came to be there.

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Tommy FumblesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
As the title of the review says; this work is excellent in creative and captivating concept but also enticingly eloquent in expressing exciting passages.
This may only be a minor issue for most readers but, the biggest flaw I see is the unclear wording of certain sections that slow comprehension and require moderate deciphering to capture what is being conveyed.
Ethan FitzgeraldRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's such a wonderful story, but early on I feel a little lost in the magic system, because at first it isn't well explained, and leaves it hard to focus on the story of whats happening at first. Going back and rereading it I found so much more of the story because I knew a little more on the magic so I could focus on the story than trying to understand the chaos of the forces being used.
Also, the lisp is a wonderful touch. It adds something amazing to the character that brings in wonderful emersion into the world.
Amazing story, would reccomend, can't wait to see what comes next!