A second chance in a new world

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What happens when you die and meet a God?What do you think when you're not the only one who is being reincarnated in a fantasy world?-------------Feel free to put in suggestions to where I should go with this story and how I can improve my writing.This is my first time doing something like this. The tags can change depending on suggestions.

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Status
Hiatus

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4.1/ 5.0
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284

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Community Reviews(5)

  • GiantsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I have read the past and most recent rewritten version of this and both have differences and much needed growth and change in the areas that needed help. I love the writing style mostly because it sounds very clear and easy to know what is happening
  • bobniniRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    well, this rewritten fiction is way better than the old one, but i hope you delete the old, because its confusing when you are reading the new one and evreything changes from one to another. but anyway im loving a lot soo far the new one, remember me of the good xian novel, its well written and the story is amazing, keep the good work
  • TwistedRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    At the moment its a little cliche, which isn't a bad thing but I am anticipating the release of more chapters soo I think you're doing pretty well keep up the good work! :D
  • PrettyBoyJinnRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The re-written version is way better. Main problem is that even tho people like to see the MC grow up, not in a slow pace.(hes still sad about killing animals, to eat...also his lack in confidence, the girl said he isnt great and he gets depressed... like common dude.  He just needs to stop being such a p*ssy. Other than that, this story has great potential and look forward to more chapters.
  • wraith26Royal Road
    0.5
    don like it.. make me puke.. having that wimpy mc shit isnt bearable...