A restaurant in the Apocalypse
Self-Published
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Description
Luna is just an average girl in her sophomore year of high school. She goes to a trade school for culinary arts. On one average day she finds herself sitting in class thinking about the restaurant she wishes to create and all of a sudden, DING [The apocalyptic Chef system has been activated prepare for Apocalypse]
DING [The apocalyptic Chef system is one of the 50 systems created for world preparation]
DING [Each system is linked to a specific skill and is randomly given to one random Host that has that skill]
Ding [You have been chosen to host the Apocalyptic Chef system]
DING [The apocalypse will start in 1 week please be prepared]
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Griffingamez
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 6
- Views
- 2,889
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- WeavervaleRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0First off the plot isn't bad, and the main character may seem overpowered, but it was more me trying to overlook the formatting.
Please take this with a grain of salt. Make your work easy to read, format it too look presentable(take a look at one of my chapters). Every time you have a ding! make a new line. There is no rush to publish, especially in a experimental piece like this.
If you fix that, then next address the spelling, I saw a few errors here and there, but the writing for the point across. I've never put formatting above grammar before, but there it is.
Clean it up, and hit me up for an advanced review later? I love the idea, but it was rough to read.