A Rat's Second Chance

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Description

There was once a mighty kingdom; technologically and magically advanced, morally superior to others, peaceful, and surrounded by plentiful resources. While newly emerged, it could've been an empire to rule the continent, and even more after that. That should've been its fate... If it wasn't for a lucky rat with the right skills to wipe out all of its inhabitants with a deadly plague. Now, granted to it by the system that every being has, it's been given a second chance at life for this monumental accomplishment. With the small amount of knowledge it gained in its previous life, an additional benefit as a side-effect from the reincarnation, and a little bit of luck, how will this small rat survive in a world of dangers.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
Nahhhhhhhh

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADMALE LEADNON-HUMAN LEADREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASY

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
7
Views
1,008

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • RatteRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    is good, I want to know more and keep reading. I am very interested in following this story further.
    What I don't like:
    I like most of it, but I think the grammar and word choices could be better/smoother and some things like the level-up system could be better explained
    but these things are minor overall I like the story a lot and I think you're doing a great job keep up the good work.
    What I want to see in future chapters:
    it would be nice to see the rat fleshed out more as a character in the coming chapters (I know that most rats lack...distinct character traits but this isn't your average rat). Maybe he gains a favorite food in spiders. it could also be interesting to see our rodent friend put some points into wisdom and intelligence. some more World-Building and exposition couldn't hurt.
    What I Like:
    it's a good premise with a really solid hook in the beginning. The characters feel good/organic what I mean by this is that the rat interacts with situations the way an I'll be it a very brave and intelligent rat would.
    in total:
    I like this book. it's not perfect but nothing is, and I look forward to watching it grow, expand, and improve as you continue to elevate the story to the great heights I know you can take it to
    also, when does the Rat get named?
    MerryChristmas!