A young man makes his way to the city of Trisdia's Adventurer's Guild Hall, hoping to become an adventurer himself, so that he can play a part in helping people who are unable to protect themselves.

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★★★ 2.5

So obviously from the title we don't except a deep philosophical story. I also haven't read very far into it AT ALL, just felt like it was good enough to at least have a review
Story: Read the title. Its okay.
Character: honestly, i didnt read enough to say much, the mc seems like a "save everyone because of traumatic past". MC seems kinda immature, but at the same time not a total brick head. Receptionist seems like the typical receptionist. Guild master is one who likes to screw up and run from the lab. A lot of typical stereotypes, but may change later on.
Grammar/style - The author doesnt make a new paragraph when using dialogue, so sometimes you get this weird conversation in one paragraph making it hard to read. Also, it can be hard to tell who is speaking every so often. There are a few more problems with dialogue. Every so often people say things that are very... strange, like why would anyone say that? or it sounds like an obvious foreshadow because of how strangly placed it is.
Other than the author's weird dialogue format, his/her other grammar is actually pretty decent for RoyalRoad standards.
Read if you just wanta chill and read about a random story of an adventurer.

A Random story of an Adventurer

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